The doctor is treated as second to god . Should we Question the treatment of the doctor by demanding access to records to the patients the doctor has previously treated. Yes , I think so.The reasons to support my claim are to provide those below.
Firstly A patient spends a fortune for treatment, he/she has the right to know about the doctor and his track record, Which will inturn tell in skill/expertise in handling a particular disease. For Eg, the treatment of brain tumor cases requires around 10-20Lakhs Rupees in India this is a huge amount for any middle-class people.Hence the patient has right to know about his/surgeon
Diseases like the one mentioned above are life-threatening. The mortality rate this disease is about 30-40% . hence patient has the right to know whether the doctor he/ she getting treatment from has saved people with this particular disease.This information will indeed help the patient make an informed decision about his healthcare specialist.
But while providing other patients information the particular patient's name should be kept anonymous because these other patients have the fundamental right to protect their identity.And disclosing their identity would harm their social life, as some people wouldn't like to not disclose Their diseases like AIDS,Cancer .
In some i think the patient should have easy access to his/her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patient.As patient invest a lot of money in thier treatment should know thier doctor's competence.And after knowing about thier doctor experience in solving life threatening diseaBut at the same time the medical information of these other patients should be kept anonymous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, similarly, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 263.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41825095057 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8783252794 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.970312862 60.3974514979 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303984741644 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132590739065 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115291041564 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177726497781 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10650616954 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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