An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted
patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is
competent to treat that medical condition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation
and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe
specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and
explain how these examples shape your position.
Doctors are, in the truest essence, life-savers. They take an oath for putting the life of the patient above everything else. While a patient might want to know about the reputation of a doctor before visiting him or her, having easy access to the doctor's previous treatment records must not be a determining factor in getting treatment from that doctor.
When a patient goes to see a doctor, he or she usually is well informed about that doctor's reputation. The reputation of a doctor is not directly related to the doctor's previous treatment records. Usually, a doctor gains fame or reputation through his treated patients. As such, this reputation can be a valid measure of the doctor's ability. However, the exact treatment records of a doctor's patient is confidential and certainly cannot be allowed to go public. This information also will not help other prospective patients to determine the doctor's competence. For example, let us consider the case of Dr.Stuart Law, a world famous cancer surgeon, who treats and operates on terminally ill cancer patients. If we were to get access to his exact treatment records, we might find that there are more number of unsuccessful operations than successful ones. Looking at such records one might think that he is not competent enough which would definitely be a blatant mistake. The primary reason for his unsuccessful surgeries is the fact that he only operates on terminally ill cancer patients who otherwise would not have any chance of survival. Hence, a patient cannot properly determine the competence of a doctor just by looking at his previous treatment records.
Furthermore, a patient does not have proper medical knowledge about the treatment methods that doctors employ. As a result, even if the patient had the treatment record of his doctor, he would not be able to identify whether the record is a positive one or negative. Such an example can be found in the autobiography of multi-billionaire businessman Mark Ziegler. He once checked the treatment history of his personal doctor and found that most of the doctor's patient had recovered from treatment. However, he did not benefit much from the doctor's treatment due to the fact that his ailment was different from the patients who's records he checked.
On the contrary, in certain specific situations, a patient might need to consider looking into the doctor's history. A doctor with less reputation may not be well qualified to treat patients with complex ailments.
In light of the above, we can conclude that it is often not a good idea for a patient to be looking into their doctor's records as this might be more inimical than beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...patient goes to see a doctor, he or she usually is well informed about that doctors reputa...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...eputation can be a valid measure of the doctors ability. However, the exact treatment r...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...r prospective patients to determine the doctors competence. For example, let us conside...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Stuart
...example, let us consider the case of Dr.Stuart Law, a world famous cancer surgeon, who...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...wever, he did not benefit much from the doctors treatment due to the fact that his ailm...
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Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...ailment was different from the patients whos records he checked. On the contrary,...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...might need to consider looking into the doctors history. A doctor with less reputation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02934537246 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79025217271 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487584650113 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0152088855 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1363636364 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373171032109 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128021823005 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596046952818 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223248693813 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067506958837 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.