All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
The statement contended that companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for more efficient way to operate company it's batter to spend more time listening to their own employees ,I agree with that because if outside consultancy came to you and tell what is morel and immoral they not working in the company and not know how the company work.
Firstly, if any consultancy gives any advice to that company is to what base 1. compare to other company OR 2 .study about a company and that give to advise &; 3.study of reliance to connect the company that are bases consultancy advise to company. That is benefit the company if there is any other company and compare that top level company to get progress so it's benefit to that company to hire outside consultancy often to get what company need to progress
However, any company not get market review that is horrible to that company's market there happened to the NOKIA mobile phone company when in twenty century start with the new handset and new touch screen mobile phone Nokia stuck in the old hand set and product not improved there company so that after such long gurney it crass and other company hire that so that example so the absence of market and reliance of market and lack of information also consultancy to advise that what is really want to change in the company in progress .In this case absence of consultancy is really help that in direction.
Secondly, If there is another example like locale are retail business there employ better know what is help to that to growth the business because employ connect with customer and they know that particular are and people what people want and when they want that particular thing and came to the store . In this example consultancy not know that area and reliance.
In fact if other examples like car manufacturing company not hire consultancy it’s batter to discuss to their sells employ what people want and which type of fiches they want .because it’s not batter to hire consultancy if this case if consultancy just compared one company to other company or give advice what company fault to comparing other opponent est. But consultancy not gave advise like employ like change product design and what company give New .that big thing if company do same thing what other doing it’s not better future for company. It’s better to listen your employ for company future.!
In sum, I agree with the statement, companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary that so company employ feel like he/she is part of that company and it he/she work for benefit to company. That to be work company growth more through teamwork.” Talent wins game, but teamwork wins championship”.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in fact', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287937743191 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.161478599222 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0739299610895 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0525291828794 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408560311284 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103112840467 0.12292977631 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0194552529183 0.0406280797675 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.48589461987 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0642023346304 0.030933414821 208% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0622568093385 0.0997080785238 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00194552529183 0.0249443105267 8% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0330739299611 0.0148568991511 223% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2797.0 2732.02544248 102% => OK
No of words: 474.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90084388186 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345991561181 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246835443038 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128691983122 0.200843997647 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0801687763713 0.132149295362 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48589461987 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392405063291 0.48968727796 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5874994506 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.4 23.380412469 203% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 209.429725684 59.4972553346 352% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 279.7 141.124799967 198% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.4 23.380412469 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.674092028746 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 72.0835443038 51.4728631049 140% => OK
Elegance: 1.6106870229 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39467866821 0.391690518653 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.269467986289 0.123202303941 219% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0972637028722 0.077325440228 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.725528439437 0.547984918172 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.285249520705 0.149214159877 191% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216363534057 0.161403998019 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155908868107 0.0892212321368 175% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393551368336 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0964222348008 0.0692045440612 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281964125031 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14926257244 0.0653680567796 228% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.