The statement suggest two approaches to enhance the efficiency of operation of the company.Consultants are specialized people who has knowledge as well as experience of different method for companies benefits whereas employee are the backbone of the company and understands the company in a much better way. After the analysis of both approaches consultants are much more advised.
The consultants have knowledge of the different ways as well as has experience to analyze the current situation of the company. Different approaches can have different impact on the overall growth of the company so discerning people are needed. consultant expert in finding all the aspects which will be impacted- pro and cons of each decision. Therefore, best approach can be advised and executed.
Employees have knowledge only about the particular department of the company. As the size of the company increase, so does the levels of the company and the transparency of the company system. Though employee can improve one department's efficiency, it might result in impacting other department efficiency and lead to overall decrease of the companies efficiency. Consultant can lookover all the department at same time and balance out the different approaches for the employees.
Though consultant can make a great difference on overall work experience, views of the varies employee plays a major role in the consultants approaches.Employee being better know provide best way to improve their current situation.
A coin never have only one side. Both the approaches should go hand and hand to get best out of the overall efficiency of the companies growth.Views of the employee should be considered and executed by the consultants after analyzing all the clauses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consultants
... efficiency of operation of the company.Consultants are specialized people who has knowledg...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tands the company in a much better way. After the analysis of both approaches consult...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consultant
...ompany so discerning people are needed. consultant expert in finding all the aspects which...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...pro and cons of each decision. Therefore, best approach can be advised and executed. ...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ncy and lead to overall decrease of the companies efficiency. Consultant can lookover all...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Employee
...ajor role in the consultants approaches.Employee being better know provide best way to i...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...s approaches.Employee being better know provide best way to improve their current situation....
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: HAND_AND_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hand in hand'?
Suggestion: hand in hand
...one side. Both the approaches should go hand and hand to get best out of the overall efficien...
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...st out of the overall efficiency of the companies growth.Views of the employee should be ...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Views
...rall efficiency of the companies growth.Views of the employee should be considered an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 33.0505617978 6% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42700729927 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15489998165 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492700729927 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.41114133 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289956044935 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104352172072 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765217717087 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170127042135 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675313032056 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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