In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Naive to expert is the unidirection of a way of life. begginer is a always a fresh, juvenile and ebullient. while expert has right sense and astuteness in the field. expert has always skeptism in the process while begginer has full of alacrity. both are paramount importance in the field of a learning. The claim of the begginer is the more up hand for contributing in the inquiry is redundant as the expert role in the process is prime one.
expert is the only person who have final words to say in a any process. they are filled with experience, and they have ability to direct the any work in the suitable form at which begginer may not be capable of. it cannot be deny that the begginer has lots of working potential in future, but, to make it useful, expert is needed. In instance, in the field of experiment, lab work is mainly done by the scholar. The data gathered in the experiment is presented infront of the professor to access the realiablity of the work. without the expert it seems like the force without control. it can be useful if only the presence of the guidance, and the professor act s as guidance and they frame the work.
Similarly, the begginer has little idea to do any thing in the process and they always required the prodigy in the process. they may have an idea to what but they rarely have an idea how to do that. expert can acts as guide in the process without him the end point may not be found. In instance, scholars wants to study some thing special in the field of th microbiology and he wants to exploit the ressitivity of certain microbe in certain harsh condition. he may surely has an idea but his practical implication may not fruitful without the expert helps.
In analytical view of any inquiry, expert has prime opinion to understand the process and to intrepret the outcome as a whole. The meaning of the final thrust is always essential to make the process sense. So, without expert, any fashion of information becomes trite.
The important of experts and a begginer is equally important in any filed of inquiry as they both possesse equal contribution in the process. it will not be wise to underscore one and understate other. it would be better to acknowledge both importance in the subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Begginer
...t is the unidirection of a way of life. begginer is a always a fresh, juvenile and ebull...
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Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...direction of a way of life. begginer is a always a fresh, juvenile and ebullient....
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...always a fresh, juvenile and ebullient. while expert has right sense and astuteness i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Expert
...ight sense and astuteness in the field. expert has always skeptism in the process whil...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
...ss while begginer has full of alacrity. both are paramount importance in the field o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Expert
...ert role in the process is prime one. expert is the only person who have final words...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y person who have final words to say in a any process. they are filled with exper...
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Suggestion: They
...ve final words to say in a any process. they are filled with experience, and they ha...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... begginer has lots of working potential in future, but, to make it useful, expert is need...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y done by the scholar. The data gathered in the experiment is presented infront o...
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Suggestion: Without
... to access the realiablity of the work. without the expert it seems like the force with...
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Suggestion: It
...t seems like the force without control. it can be useful if only the presence of t...
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...rly, the begginer has little idea to do any thing in the process and they always required...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ys required the prodigy in the process. they may have an idea to what but they rarel...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Expert
...hey rarely have an idea how to do that. expert can acts as guide in the process withou...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'act'
Suggestion: act
...have an idea how to do that. expert can acts as guide in the process without him the...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...d. In instance, scholars wants to study some thing special in the field of th microbiology...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ain microbe in certain harsh condition. he may surely has an idea but his practica...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...esse equal contribution in the process. it will not be wise to underscore one and ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...to underscore one and understate other. it would be better to acknowledge both imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59305210918 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57483838015 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1503772144 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.125 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7916666667 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124038324188 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392474240996 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287914825843 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768749680321 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254535147221 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.