The assertion that the society must prepare its young people in all the fields by encouraging a sense a coorporation rather competition is a controversial one. On one side competition makes people blind in order to win and on the other hand cooperation may help a person climb a ladder with difficulties. However in the final analysis, to encourage young people one should encourage cooperation rather than competition.
Firstly, who is a leader? A leader is a person who gathers all the positives from a team and empowers the team to win or achieve its goal(short term or long term). But what if a leader indulges in competition? Suddenly the vision of the leader is now to win and not achieve its ultimate goal and this indirectly avers that the team also tries to win. The "WHY" of the team changes. The team tries to run after the "WHAT". The point I am trying to make here is that the captain of the team brings out the best from each of its team members and this is only possible through a sense of cooperation. Through cooperation a team gets to learn a lot from each other. One man's strength is another man's weakness. Through cooperation the weak team member is able to strengthen his/her weakness and this indirectly means that the team will benefit from it. Hence, cooperation is what is needed in a team and not competition.
Secondly, what is actually needed is Healthy competition and not just competition. From what I mean from the word "Healthy" is; competition should be such that it nourishes all the parties involved in it. From economics we can see that prices of any goods are controlled only through healthy competition. Through constructive competition all the parties involved are able to gain for all other parties involved in competition. Weak teams can benefit from the strong teams. One example of not taking a path of cooperation is of Nokia. Till 2006 nokia was the leading seller of mobile phones in the market. But in 2007 google came to nokia with a proposal of having a new operating system in its mobile phones. Nokia saw Google as competition and not as integrating partners. What happened next is andriod was the next big thing in cell phones and nokia missed the opportunity to be a part of it. Now in 2018 nokia has its phones having android operating system. But it took 10 years for nokia to do it. Hence for a country or any other team, the leader should be instilled in a sense of cooperation or healthy competition.
Despite this fact, sometimes competition is needed. Through competition a sense of competitiveness is brought out. People try to put in extra efforts in order to win. But this again means that people should not be only motivated to win.
Hence, to learn from a wise rival is the best thing a team wants. Hence in teaching leadership institutions should encourage cooperation along with a healthy competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, i mean, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79482071713 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92971819099 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434262948207 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0292822112 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9393939394 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2121212121 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69696969697 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128315368924 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355547944558 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431073838721 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777616671835 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368429895716 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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