Youth are the future of many nations; better the condition of youth better will be the nation tomorrow. If any nation wants to see his country bright tomorrow, they should have to move forward to increase the sense of cooperation rather than competition. If young people work there and take leadership in any aspect of a country like government, industry, or another field amiable sense of cooperation, the country will progress excessively.
The first reason for my belief is that competition brings a dissonance effect and cooperation brings resonance effect. There is no more doubt about the necessity of youth in every aspect of society. And, there is also established truth that youth blood is so energetic and mercurial. Small things can make you them quiescent and small things can make them arrogant. For example, if there is competition among the youth to take part in the government, the unnecessary clash is likely to have occurred. On the flip side, if there is good cooperation between the youth, they will discuss the possible change can be occurred by taking part in government and there will discuss the suitable person for the suitable post. From this illustration, we can easily forecast which will be best either cooperation or competition.
The second reason for my belief is that Unity is the best policy for all realms. We all know that the youth people are the power bank of any nation. Cooperation between the youth in order to lead asocial organizations will promote the progress and prosperity of the entire society. Cooperation makes a strong bond which can be used to cure any kind of diseases if occurred in any organizations. If a person comes from competition, who is leading an organization, got any problem, have to face challenges alone. Another competitive fellow will enjoy on his trouble and ultimately the entire society will get the negative impact.
However, the cooperation between the youth to lead any social organization is better for many reasons; we cannot abolish the positive vibes of competition between the eligible youngsters. From one standpoint, it is also true that cooperation will just manage the situation but competition will bring new innovative ideas to resolve the situations. I also cannot disregard the competition among the youth, who are leading the social organizations, in bringing innovative ideas. I also strongly believe that a competitive environment between the erudite youth brains is the best ground to flourish the superior ideas.
In sum, society should have to try to maintain the cooperative feelings between the young generation who are going to lead the government, industry, or other institutions. Cooperation brings unity; unity brings peace, progress, and capability to fight against the problem. In addition, we will also not have to discourage the healthy intellectual competitions between the young erudite fellow who deserve to bring new innovative ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Youth are the future of many nations; better the ...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...he situation but competition will bring new innovative ideas to resolve the situations. I also...
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Line 9, column 415, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...ung erudite fellow who deserve to bring new innovative ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, as to, for example, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 12.9106741573 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22526315789 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88528907994 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5846968107 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.913043478 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.652173913 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136016639562 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04156204402 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438924037709 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806649554759 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350182447954 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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