One of the major aspects in the development of a society is the effective use of resources and information at its disposal. There has been concrete evidence since the early human civilizations, that good governance can’t be achieved without a perusal of resources available on the table. Most of the countries around the world are known by the cities and the metropolitans they inhabit. I partially agree with the above statement pertaining to three core reasons.
Proper planning is often espoused with the proper discharge of functions by various levels in a city’s administration. Major cities are not only a source of income for their present dwellers but also act as the daily bread provider to families who migrate to big townships and localities with the better proposes of education, jobs, and family welfare. So there is an unending requirement of proper infrastructure to accommodate the growing populations of major cities. For instance, Countries like India house metro cities like Mumbai who witnessed a surge of population in measures of thousands every day. This indicates the constant flow of cash and other monetary benefits, so as to keep the city running and maintain a solid booming economy for the region. This makes the development of roads, highway, residential zones a must for its people to thrive and earn money which indirectly benefits the whole country. If we speak about this in naivety, the taxes and the various surcharges were taken by the governments is being returned of back in the form of investment in the public sector and the institutions that are cardinal in maintaining the socio-economic harmony.
There have been various case studies of municipal corporations and money-mongering establishments that ransack money from their people and turn a blind eye on the various issues existing in large cities, since a long period of time. Such avaricious practices often result in the administration being overthrown by the people themselves in the upcoming municipal elections. To ameliorate the various mishaps and malpractices of the administration, various projects are hastily completed before elections to satiate the electoral vote in the favor of the ruling party. This makes the money invested or allotted by the government not only superfluous but also makes the citizens prone to various insecure projects that might have been developed with the upcoming elections in mind. So, in such scenarios, the money allotted for the proper distribution among various infrastructure goes down the drain due to lack of willpower and planning by the local administration. Thus the government should always be vigilant of studying the usage of the funds allotted and conduct a proper, unbiased investigation in case of any misconduct. Allotting money and being ignorant about its consumption won’t be fruitful to governments that expect on-ground developments.
There is a common psychological phenomenon that “when a man works for the benefits of a section, the section looks up to him and supports him for continuing the good work, irrespective of its future ramifications in mind.” The same phenomena are applicable to the government or the ruling party in power. Countries like the ones in the Middle East, India, Bangladesh have a significant amount of illiterate population. These people are always prone to succumb under the preview of false developments promises made by the people in power to regain power after their term terminates. Now with the ever-growing technology, people have been more educated into seeing what actually the governments has done, or plans to do with the help of news and various other “information baskets”. So the government needs to ensure that the people of major cities witness the development and praise the ruling party so as to reelect them into power in the upcoming elections. Once the notion of fake promises is established in the minds of the local population, there is no stopping of bringing down the government and granting power to people who are able to maintain the fundamentals of democracy.
In all, to conclude, there has been proper communication between the ruling government and the local administrations to ensure that there is effective consumption of money for development of infrastructure and for the satisfaction of the citizens of major cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: The proper name in singular (Bangladesh) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s in the Middle East, India, Bangladesh have a significant amount of illiterate popu...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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...development and praise the ruling party so as to reelect them into power in the upcoming...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, thus, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 119.0 58.6224719101 203% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 34.0 12.9106741573 263% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3698.0 2235.4752809 165% => OK
No of words: 696.0 442.535393258 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3132183908 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13632280105 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13253056186 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 344.0 215.323595506 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1174.5 704.065955056 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5172398477 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.92 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.84 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125302936753 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363446017547 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358350847 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752512581378 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029825006965 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 191.0 100.480337079 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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