Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The assumption that it is primarily in the cities that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated, makes me feel uncomfortable as I don’t fully agree with it. Many of the cities today endorse the preservation of the culture by building big museums and creating traditional parades and festivals for the public. Hence, one can learn a lot about the local culture by spending time in those cities and participate in the different activities out there. However, in the past and in the modern world, cities usually serve as the hub of the financial market. People come to the cities from all over the world for many reasons such as business, or just by being a tourist. This creates a natural situation where people bringing their own traditions and cultures to the place, hence the variety of different smells, languages, foods and cloths will be seen in those places. Moreover, even museums today exchange their artifacts with other museums. hence the eclectic collection they have. For example, the British Museum in London, has original mummies from Egypt. These mummies do not reflect anything of the British culture. Another good example of a city that reflects nothing of the population living there, is Hong Kong. This city was a colony of Britain for many years and has all of the modern aspects to it. Also, Hong Kong is the hub of the financial center of the world. However, today, Hong Kong belongs to China. If going to Hong Kong, you cannot find the Chinese tradition there. Therefore, it is clear that if thinking about preserving tradition, China should not focus on financial support to Honk Kong. In Contrary, if looking for a place where tradition is really preserved, China should look in to the rural areas and villages where there is no foreign influence. Same when thinking about other countries for example, India. When visiting the big cities Delhi and Bombay, you can find a lot of the industrial influence on it’s culture. However, when traveling deeper in to the rural areas of the country, you can experience and learn more about the traditional culture such as women wearing the Sari, man wearing the Turban hat, traditional food, different smells and more.
In conclusion, it is important that the government supports their major cities in order to thrive, but not in focusing on the nation’s culture and tradition. If focusing on the culture and tradition, the government should support the villages and smaller cities as well, since in those places it is more likely to be preserved better with no outside influences.
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...more likely to be preserved better with no outside influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99537037037 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61750186535 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1541041683 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0909090909 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297010779402 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814117553952 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869903758826 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263105990956 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327783560613 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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