- For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses Last year however all of the five best selling cheeses at our newest store were domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin Furthermore a recent surve 73
- The following is an excerpt from a speech given to the School Board about a change to the curriculum Because the future will be dominated by technology we must make four years of computer programming mandatory for all high school students If our students 68
- Two years ago the town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel During the past two years tourism in Ocean View has increased new businesses have opened there and Ocean View s tax revenues have risen by 30 percent The best w 68
- In any field of endeavor it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field 83
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threaten the integrity of the arts 58
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'besiege'
Suggestion: besiege
...ns, a modern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creativ...
^^
Line 6, column 980, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'directors'' or 'director's'?
Suggestion: directors'; director's
... which is currently ongoing. It was the directors freedom to express the story behind the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rampled under the aegis of obscureness. Hence it is necessary for artist to be free w...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 566, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...antly, such symphony became a legendary works, as all other artiste leveraged on it a...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t, and censor bodies, as to ensure they dont create objects or stories of disunity, ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 368, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'checkmated'?
Suggestion: checkmated
... singing. Such dastardly acts should be checkmate, and the copyright, and video censoring...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 113, Rule ID: SAFE_HAVEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...bt can make the world a better place, a safe haven, and also a loved place. Artist should ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, while, as to, of course, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 14.8657303371 262% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 118.0 58.6224719101 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3986.0 2235.4752809 178% => OK
No of words: 788.0 442.535393258 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05837563452 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29823911269 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87228951725 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 408.0 215.323595506 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517766497462 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 1240.2 704.065955056 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 28.0 1.77640449438 1576% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5484830702 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.866666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222200349371 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561892501339 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490449801061 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120081071468 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362885121821 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 217.0 100.480337079 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'besiege'
Suggestion: besiege
...ns, a modern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creativ...
^^
Line 6, column 980, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'directors'' or 'director's'?
Suggestion: directors'; director's
... which is currently ongoing. It was the directors freedom to express the story behind the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rampled under the aegis of obscureness. Hence it is necessary for artist to be free w...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 566, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...antly, such symphony became a legendary works, as all other artiste leveraged on it a...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t, and censor bodies, as to ensure they dont create objects or stories of disunity, ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 368, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'checkmated'?
Suggestion: checkmated
... singing. Such dastardly acts should be checkmate, and the copyright, and video censoring...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 113, Rule ID: SAFE_HAVEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...bt can make the world a better place, a safe haven, and also a loved place. Artist should ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, while, as to, of course, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 14.8657303371 262% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 118.0 58.6224719101 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3986.0 2235.4752809 178% => OK
No of words: 788.0 442.535393258 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05837563452 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29823911269 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87228951725 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 408.0 215.323595506 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517766497462 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 1240.2 704.065955056 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 28.0 1.77640449438 1576% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5484830702 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.866666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222200349371 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561892501339 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490449801061 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120081071468 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362885121821 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 217.0 100.480337079 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.