"Without Freedom, the creative artist would be in chains, a modern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away".
Creativity is the birth of innovation, the soul most ultimate way of expressing the creator or author's idea in such an exorbitant display of artistic style either in words, pictures, or music. Any means by which the artist wants to express him or herself is welcome, and should be applauded with alacrity and grittiness, without interference as discussed below.
Great paintings that soared the early 19th century were borne out of an inordinate passion to express, and pass messages of divinity, diligence, and dichotomy in thoughts, and patterns. Most of such works were hailed and became hallmark of artistic omniscience - a mindset of referring to a master piece as a yardstick for all other drawings. One of such works is the great painting by Leonardo Da Vinci, titled "The Mona-Lisa", in which he captured a strong representation of a male-female personality whose angle of view to the viewer is accurate at every point in time. Leonardo had the opportunity and freedom to express his concept about angulation of human nature with respect to different views. This freedom produced the great art work - Mona Lisa, and has come to be a trademark for artistic reverence, and scholarly work. The paintings of the Mona Lisa when auctioned could amount to millions of dollars showing that if artist were free in their expression of ideas, and thoughts, income, and revenue could also come alongside.
Furthermore, it also open up to a world of diverse opportunity, and diversification, and helps the audience have an elaborate view. Diversity of opinions could arise from different artist, but their ability to communicate such opinion could give room for a dynasty of open-mindedness among the audience. The late 19th century saw the birth of a movie called Titanic - a story of a hero lover who died on the worlds first and most beautiful ship sailing across United States to London. Of course, a lot of people who had read about the titanic, and how it sank, may never have the full picture and the story behind the ship failure. However, with the efforts of the producer- John M who decided to describe the whole incidence in a movie - which saw millions of viewers across the world viewing, and passing a message of love, sacrifice, and ambition, held most people spell bound, and brought a lot of discourse on rebuilding the Titanic - which is currently ongoing. It was the director's freedom to express the story behind the sinking ship that brought an austere of hope, and gave people a belief. If such freedom were taken away, the memories of Titanic would be in books - scrampled under the aegis of obscureness. Hence it is necessary for artist to be free when expressing their ideas.
Moreover, it paves way for uniqueness, originality and creates a pathway for growth for upcoming artiste. This is one of the held sway views by the younger generations, who see freedom as a path of expression of their innate ability and being unique. The great music composer Beethoven when composing music, decided to take the path of symphony, different from the traditional, rock, pop, and jazz. Every personal computer has a Beethoven symphony accompanied with it to test run their media player - interesting. More importantly, such symphony became a legendary works, as all other artiste leveraged on it and create a divergent symphony. In music, the word symphony is allegedly tied to Beethoven, something he deserved, and did because of his ability to freely express himself, and stand out from the traditional music folks.
Nevertheless, artist could still be under certain obligations by the government, and censor bodies, as to ensure they don't create objects or stories of disunity, and disenfranchisement, which can lead to civil unrest. A recent example is the viral video of R. Kelly going to the club with under-age girls, smoking heavily while singing. Such dastardly acts should be checkmate, and the copyright, and video censoring board which is being controlled by the government, should help prevent promotion of such music videos as it could give rise to rapes, child molestation, gangsterism, hooliganism, and societal nuisance. This would go a long way in helping the industry.
Freedom of expression, creativity, and innovation without an iota of doubt can make the world a better place, a safe haven, and also a loved place. Artist should be free to express themselves in any form they chose, and also pass a message of hope to the populace at large, nonetheless, the hovering bird of the government needs to be above them for outright misbehaviors which could be detrimental to the society.
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 79
- The following is an excerpt from a speech given to the School Board about a change to the curriculum Because the future will be dominated by technology we must make four years of computer programming mandatory for all high school students If our students 68
- Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership 66
- For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses Last year however all of the five best selling cheeses at our newest store were domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin Furthermore a recent surve 73
- In any field of endeavor it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field 83
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'besiege'
Suggestion: besiege
...ns, a modern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creativ...
^^
Line 6, column 980, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'directors'' or 'director's'?
Suggestion: directors'; director's
... which is currently ongoing. It was the directors freedom to express the story behind the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rampled under the aegis of obscureness. Hence it is necessary for artist to be free w...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 566, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...antly, such symphony became a legendary works, as all other artiste leveraged on it a...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t, and censor bodies, as to ensure they dont create objects or stories of disunity, ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 368, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'checkmated'?
Suggestion: checkmated
... singing. Such dastardly acts should be checkmate, and the copyright, and video censoring...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 113, Rule ID: SAFE_HAVEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...bt can make the world a better place, a safe haven, and also a loved place. Artist should ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, while, as to, of course, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 14.8657303371 262% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 118.0 58.6224719101 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3986.0 2235.4752809 178% => OK
No of words: 788.0 442.535393258 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05837563452 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29823911269 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87228951725 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 408.0 215.323595506 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517766497462 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 1240.2 704.065955056 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 28.0 1.77640449438 1576% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5484830702 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.866666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222200349371 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561892501339 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490449801061 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120081071468 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362885121821 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 217.0 100.480337079 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'besiege'
Suggestion: besiege
...ns, a modern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dern slavery of his ideas would besieged him till he passes away'. Creativ...
^^
Line 6, column 980, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'directors'' or 'director's'?
Suggestion: directors'; director's
... which is currently ongoing. It was the directors freedom to express the story behind the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rampled under the aegis of obscureness. Hence it is necessary for artist to be free w...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 566, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...antly, such symphony became a legendary works, as all other artiste leveraged on it a...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t, and censor bodies, as to ensure they dont create objects or stories of disunity, ...
^^^^
Line 10, column 368, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'checkmated'?
Suggestion: checkmated
... singing. Such dastardly acts should be checkmate, and the copyright, and video censoring...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 113, Rule ID: SAFE_HAVEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...bt can make the world a better place, a safe haven, and also a loved place. Artist should ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, while, as to, of course, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 14.8657303371 262% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 118.0 58.6224719101 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3986.0 2235.4752809 178% => OK
No of words: 788.0 442.535393258 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05837563452 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29823911269 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87228951725 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 408.0 215.323595506 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517766497462 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 1240.2 704.065955056 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 28.0 1.77640449438 1576% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5484830702 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.866666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222200349371 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561892501339 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490449801061 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120081071468 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362885121821 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 217.0 100.480337079 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.