It is recommended that innovative creator spread their own thinking in field of such as words, picture, music, or films in a very freely way through their own perspective. There should be no high authority stop on their ideas what they do. I accord with this said notion due to they can get aware from the natural disasters and youth know about our culture and traditions..
To commence with the view of agreement, artists can make wrong things in their any field of production. To explain it, they can make the wrong prediction and upload videos on the social media about the politics, another nations and wrong news which is not relevant in any field. As a result, people see their all news on the internet and they do bad things.
Shifting towards the view of disagreement, imaginative people make the picture and films about the how natural disaster create in the environment, with this picture humans can get aware. To elaborate it, they see the natural disaster movies and then they see the conclusion and see that how the these are all dangerous moments create in the areas, they can aware and do not wrong things in the atmosphere. To example it, a survey was conducted by the Head of the Forest Department found in the 2016 that those people who saw the natural disaster films, they were never cut the trees and try to safe their atmosphere. Hence, individuals can never face the oxygen hurdles which is produce by trees.
In addition to this, they can create music, lyrics and video about our culture. In other words, nowadays youngster are forget about their traditions, but when they listen music, lyrics and see videos about their culture and they gain information and they can not go on the bad path. For instance, a headline was published in THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that teenagers forget about their traditions clothes but when they see about their culture clothes and they start to wear and respect of their culture. Therefore, next generation will never forget rules about their lifestyle and limitations.
In conclusion, although they can create wrong things on the internet yet, i believe that they can spread awareness in society and also helpful for the new generation.
- The table below gives information about population of over 60 year olds in six regions in 2000 and the predicted number of population over 60 in 2050 It also shows the world population over 60 in 2000 and 2050 Summarise the information in the following th
- The graph below shows the acid level in mouth from consumption of sugar and honey Eating sweet food produces acid in the mouth which can cause tooth decay 61
- The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem 67
- Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who do this 56
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games what are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87566137566 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47019267505 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497354497354 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9929430329 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.866666667 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242096655526 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995435175566 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938460316224 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146835816336 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882396892267 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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