Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Being able to comunnicate is a powerful ability as we can solve a lot of our problems with discussion. Now, discussing controversial topics with people having opossite view can some times not end well but for me this can be helpful as you can learn what others are thinking and compere it with your opinion. There is a specific topic, core beliefs, that is somewhat difficult to convice people to change their mind. Trying to do so this will break into fights, so not usful at all.
To start with, there are some topics with your friend that you do not talk about because you have different opinion. Let's take an example of football teams. Your friend is passionate with team X. He goes in every football match, because was raised like that. No matter how many times I will try to convice him to change team, he will not and some times the conversation will break into fight.
Moreover, think of more extreme controversial topics like politics or religion. We watch on television everyday the politics discussing nonstop with out finding a common ground. No-one change opinion.
On the other hand, talking about a regular day of a Software Developer there is a plethora of discussions with contratictiong viewpoints. The leader of the team need to convice the team which is correct or not usefull with evidence. Thus, discussing will sove the problem and the team will continue to finish the project.
To sum up, trying to change the core beliefs of a person is sometimes impposible. That's how the grew up and this is what it make it impossible.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...out because you have different opinion. Lets take an example of football teams. Your...
^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ics or religion. We watch on television everyday the politics discussing nonstop with ou...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...veryday the politics discussing nonstop with out finding a common ground. No-one change ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...fs of a person is sometimes impposible. Thats how the grew up and this is what it mak...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ats how the grew up and this is what it make it impossible.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, talking about, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74907749077 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5700252699 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4343987903 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286858790668 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807924369817 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727043660159 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139694724308 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592877619325 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...out because you have different opinion. Lets take an example of football teams. Your...
^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ics or religion. We watch on television everyday the politics discussing nonstop with ou...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...veryday the politics discussing nonstop with out finding a common ground. No-one change ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...fs of a person is sometimes impposible. Thats how the grew up and this is what it mak...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ats how the grew up and this is what it make it impossible.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, talking about, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74907749077 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5700252699 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4343987903 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286858790668 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807924369817 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727043660159 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139694724308 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592877619325 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.