Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Everything in the world needs a formal process to happen successfully and in orderly manner, the same applies to education as well. Formal education is required for form base of students, on which they can build a building of their interest. According the author, formal education restrain our mind rather than set them free. 'All or nothing' expression of this statement poses a question on it.
In the formal education system, children go to school till their teen age and there they learn all the subjects such as language, math, arts, engineering. After high school they are ready to study field of their interest. Now, if we remove this formal system, children in the schools will be free to study whatever they want, at this time they might not have enough knowledge to choose what to study, even of their parents will help them in choosing subjects, it can't be guaranteed that their choice of subjects give them knowledge what they have to learn while growing. So the formal education system is required to give a base to students to start learning.
In formal education system, it required to learn history of inventions in all the subjects, which helps students to know what is been invented already in the history, otherwise they might invent something which is already invented years ago. For example, if a student who doesn't study in formal education system says he invented an electron, then it will be ironic, because electrons are discovered and being used from many years. Here formal education system benefiting students to teach them what is being already discovered and what are present or future problems needs to be solved or inventions can be done in particular subject.
There is always two sides of a coin. Other side of formal education system is that in some countries education system completely depend on good grades, some students can cram whole book and write in exam and get good grades while others studying by understanding and subjects might not get good grades. In this case most of the time students with good grades are getting preference in jobs or higher eduction admissions which is not good. For example, this eduction system followed in India, and good grades are always been a selection criteria for job or other school admissions. The students with good understanding but low grades sometimes end up paying price of not getting job and job industry has many people who have bookish knowledge but not practical.
Thus, in conclusion, presented statement can be accepted but with little modification that formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free when it completely depend on good grades of students instead their understand of the subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: teenage
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h as language, math, arts, engineering. After high school they are ready to study fie...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...will help them in choosing subjects, it cant be guaranteed that their choice of subj...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...will help them in choosing subjects, it cant be guaranteed that their choice of subj...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ears ago. For example, if a student who doesnt study in formal education system says h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...formal education system says he invented an electron, then it will be ironic, bec...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...r than set them free when it completely depend on good grades of students instead thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98249452954 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5323895731 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474835886214 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.5508546207 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.941176471 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8823529412 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172336811097 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708082912113 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829025993431 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133509107338 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088147308233 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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