The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The best way to indicate a society greatness is an observation of people welfare. The artists, rulers, and scientists' achievements are important too; however, general comfort is the most important way to measure a nation's greatness.
There is no point of making expensive movies and awarding artists when people are hungry. Imagine a poor country like India where people do not have jobs and money to make good lives for themselves. On the other hand, rich super stars wear their expensive clothes to go to Bollywood which is not fair while general people are poor. Instead of spending money to make movies, the government should make a good environment for people.
Additionally, rulers usually sacrifice many things for their achievements that is not worthen. Imagine a poor family who has been forced to send their sons to the army to fight against their enemy. There is no actual nation's achievement when many families lose their sons to defend the country. In addition, many families may lose their jobs and money during war which is not fair. Moreover, rulers can try other ways such as talking to solve disagreements between countries which is a better way than having a war.
On the contrary, scientists' achievements are indication of a nation's welfare; however, the goal should be toward people's comfort. For example, all expensive researches to innovate Covid vaccine and to offer free vaccine to prevent people's death are an indication of a nation greatness that can be a good improvement for any country. On the other hand, unnecessary researches that are not beneficial for general welfare should not be considered good projects. Imagine a scientist who is having an expensive scientific project to produce a chemical weapon against enemies. As a result, people might even get hurt during a weapon test.
Greatness definition can be different for everyone, but an actual improvement in any country depends on how a government make a society a comfortable environment for everyone. There are many ways to measure a country's greatness such as scientists, artists, or rulers’ achievements; however, there is no actual happiness when general people are not in good conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... is the most important way to measure a nations greatness. There is no point of makin...
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Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld make a good environment for people. Additionally, rulers usually sacrifice m...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...against their enemy. There is no actual nations achievement when many families lose the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14005602241 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82697035896 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8270919962 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.944444444 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194279378801 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653847509326 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446461990445 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11099108013 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357886004469 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.