"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in
order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved
and generated."
This topic upraises the controversial issue of whether Authority must focus primarily on major city or not.Indisputably, If major cities get every opportunity it needs, then inevitably it's development and prosperity will also increase as well as as a nation's focal point it's importance to international community will also increase.Nevertheless,Only the development of one can not make a nation overall idyllic with refuting the other city's development.Thus,I generally disagree that only major cities augment will preserve the nation's cultural and traditional trend and would concur that all the cities development needs homogeneously.
First of all, If we consider only focusing on the major cities then all the people of the country will try to reach that city as it will have better employment facilities.I would like to point out that few cities will be overpopulated if we consider the issue's opinion.To illustrate let us look at a paragon,as the major city in Bangladesh, Dhaka,Chittagong overall population is higher than that the others,so accommodation facilities, overall environment and basic need to live properly are also lower in there as result of nation's trade and cultural center.In this circumstance, it is inevitable that, environment also suffers from this outcome.consequently, it is pretty ineluctable that some cities will fall under dense problems.
Furthermore, it will be naivety only considering primary urbanities.if we look at other cities we will find that they will face unemployment problems though they have enough land and manpower unused. Specifically,immoral acts will also increase in that place.so both shrewdness and savoir-faire have told us that all the cities development must be ensured.
Admittedly, if only capital is developed then overall nation's development will occur, considering the division of cities as their trade and other considering prospects, like one city will be the center of administration another will be for trade, those cities have major historical intertest it can book for tourism also.
In termination, fellow citizen of a nation's will be developed if major and minor cities development is considered homogeneously
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...rical intertest it can book for tourism also. In termination, fellow citizen of a...
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...ns will be developed if major and minor cities development is considered homogeneously...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60843373494 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58189144045 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53313253012 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 238.349008809 60.3974514979 395% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.333333333 118.986275619 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.3333333333 23.4991977007 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 5.21951772744 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242142885531 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139940730122 0.0831039109588 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672569600898 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157419410365 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615358131252 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 14.1392134831 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 48.8420337079 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 11.8971910112 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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