Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
It is the prime concern of the government to take care of the people who have given them the responsibility for the well-being of the society and its people. Governments should lay proper emphasis on the problems which occur in front of them and it’s their duty to deal with it properly. In order to maintain healthy living environment in the society government should treat both the immediate problems of today and problems which are going to occur in future equally and should try to solve them for the benefit of the people.
The issue which is immediate or is already upon us should require proper and immediate attention to deal with it otherwise it could result in a serious disaster. Like if the government will not pay immediate attention to the current scenario of the corruption which has already taken a monstrous shape then it will be a great loss for both the government and the people of the society as rich will be becoming richer and poor ones will be poorer. Proper measures should be taken to deal with the situation currently prevailing the society.
Although current problem need immediate attention but certainly that does not mean that difficulties which are imminent and inevitable should be ignored or should not dealt with proper measures. The complicacies which are going to arrive could be serious and could require immediate action in order to prevent the society from the tragic situation. For instance if we will not stop or decrease the rate of cutting trees than it will eventually lead to imbalance in the atmosphere which will further result into a disaster.
Therefore, I do assert up to some extent with the given statement but it would be an extreme statement to say that government should focus on current difficulties rather than focusing on the future problems. Problems of the future and current scenario should be dealt with proper attention and within time otherwise it would eventually lead to more complex problem which will be difficult to deal with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'deal'
Suggestion: deal
...vitable should be ignored or should not dealt with proper measures. The complicacies ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194366197183 0.240241500013 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.177464788732 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901408450704 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478873239437 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0478873239437 0.0444667217837 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123943661972 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0338028169014 0.0406280797675 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61230717242 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0422535211268 0.030933414821 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00281690140845 0.0016655270985 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.101408450704 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0619718309859 0.0249443105267 248% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0253521126761 0.0148568991511 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2010.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 339.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92920353982 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356932153392 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268436578171 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182890855457 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135693215339 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61230717242 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 219.290929204 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451327433628 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.5153907537 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 30.8181818182 23.380412469 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5405335338 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.727272727 141.124799967 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 23.380412469 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 57.6618396353 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.28865979381 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473867714514 0.391690518653 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167580270921 0.123202303941 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0673913607522 0.077325440228 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.668921910201 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116842592195 0.149214159877 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238027863641 0.161403998019 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105788582085 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.489383348542 0.385218514788 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0870765574656 0.0692045440612 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341006440903 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104202154287 0.0653680567796 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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