The claims prompt that we can usually learn from like-minded peoples from whose views contradict our own because disagreement may cause tension, demotivation and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have different opinions and supports on the given topic. Some of them go for the topic, While others can't agree with it at all. I agree with the given claims that we can usually learn much more from the people whose views we can share from those whose views contradict our own. There are three reasons and examples supporting my positions are presented in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, at the university, there are 1000 students are admitted every year. Of these thousand students, some belong to rich families and some of them belong to poor families that cannot afford education. This is the main problem of this era many talented students leave the education field due to their family status. Thus, in order to support his/her education government should offer a free university education. For instance, the United States of America provides the Fulbright for students who are bright and intelligent and who are from economically backward families.
Furthermore, the quote by Nelson Mandela, " Education is the most powerful weapon that can be used to change the whole world". For example, if education is made free for all students then more of the youth populations become more educated. In addition, a better workforce will be developed. For example, a few decades before Dubai was an undeveloped country. There is a lack of power, technology, higher buildings, and so on, However at present the most developed country, and additionally, it has become a tourist hub. Hence these all are changes due to free education.
In summary, the reasons and examples that support the claim/ position that agree with the given topic. The example of Dubai, and the United States of America illustrate support for the given topic. The essay highlights the government should offer free education to all learners who has been connected to the university but who can't their tuition fees.
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- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and suppo 58
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development
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...een connected to the university but who cant their tuition fees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65300702866 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1427582112 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7368421053 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162413834806 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537157714375 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527083441236 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104616286072 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396167089466 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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