If a goal is worthy , then any means taken to attain it are justifiable
Deeds of a person justify the character of a person. Throughout the life, a person crosses several hurdles to get that happiness which he/she yields for. According to me, a person should take necessary steps to attain the goal which is worthy for him/her. But the goal here does not mean that it undermines someone else's goal or it should not be an obstruction or it should not compromise another person's goals.
Any means taken to fulfill a good deed is justifiable but on the other end, the former statement does not hold true in the case of wrong intentions or wrong deeds. Confidence in self is the most important element needed to achieve one goal. Good intended things are meant to be fulfilled and thus the means taken to achieve good goals should be clear. Consider the case of famous epic Mahabharata, many collusions were led to kill the legends from the side of Kauravas, whereas Pandavas stayed on the path of truthfulness which ultimately led to triumph. In few cases, Lord Krishna changed the rules in between the war to teach the value of truth to the people engaged in malevolent acts during the war.
The other side of the coin in this case is not valid as any act taken to achieve a wrong intended goal can harm others in the process. There lies a subtle difference between a wrong intention followed by a wrong deed and a right intention followed by a wrong deed. In the later case, the intentions are right but while execution of that intention the result turned out as it was expected but it might have hurt the other people included in its fulfilment.
According to me, lies or some acts that might hurt someone but to achieve one good goal should not be considered as wrong.Sometimes a person has to fight for a cause which is actually good but there is no one in his/her support. In that cases, he/she should take the righteous steps to attain his/her goal . In today's world, there are many cases based on forgery taking places on the daily basis, in this type of cases the person must take a necessary step(may be wrong in some context) to establish his/her true point.
On a concluding note, righteous and wrong goals should not be characterised from the ways used to attain it , instead characterisation of intentions as good or bad is more important. Ultimately, a good deed is always intended to get completed my any means even if there are hundreds of obstructions to prove it wrong. Whereas a wrong deed may seem to get completed in the beginning but it is never meant to get accomplished as it based on the foundation of wrong intentions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...that happiness which he/she yields for. According to me, a person should take necessary steps t...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...people included in its fulfilment. According to me, lies or some acts that might hurt some...
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Line 13, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sometimes
... goal should not be considered as wrong.Sometimes a person has to fight for a cause which...
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Line 13, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e righteous steps to attain his/her goal . In todays world, there are many cases b...
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Line 17, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cterised from the ways used to attain it , instead characterisation of intentions ...
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Line 17, column 312, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wrongs'?
Suggestion: wrongs
...re hundreds of obstructions to prove it wrong. Whereas a wrong deed may seem to get c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, so, thus, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63616557734 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60125209963 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461873638344 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.041937698 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199211087533 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695203396381 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657589753557 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111086648289 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493735179451 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.