If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Accomplishing one’s goal is surely important to him or her in the way of pursuing or fulfilling one’s dream or opinion. However, as far as I am concerned it is inappropriate to attain the goal by any means even if it’s bad for others unless the goal is urgent for all people around the world.
Surely, some might think that their own benefit is much more important than any others’ because of the independent of individuality. However, what they neglect is that there’s amiability filled among the society. Human is not ought to be selfish. Only by caring with each other can the world stays in harmony.
Hence, in my perspective, when carrying out the way to accomplish the goal, it is important to take all the pros and cons that the way can bring to the society and the person that decides the methodology into account. If advantages are much bigger than disadvantages ,surely, it is worth carrying out. However, what needs to be aware of is that is important to compensate those receives disadvantages for their loss. For example, in Taipei, the major city in Taiwan, there are many old buildings that needs to be reconstructed. However, some might not be willing to rebuild their home due to their affection to the old building. Hence, it is important for government to carefully estimate pros and cons. Once, deciding to carry out the reestablishment, they also need to compensate the resident with money and the support when the residents try finding new place to live.
However, if the goal is justice for the world, which is set to annihilate the malice to the word, it can be done by all means. For example, ISIS is a terrorist group which put the world in danger. Hence, it is justifiable for UN to take them down even using the powerful weapon in order to maintain the peace of the world.
All in all, I don’t think goal can be taken in any means to make it fulfill. When deciding the way to take it , we need to put ourselves in the basis of humanity so that we don’t do harm to the society and lessen the negative effect to others.
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- Claim Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive Reason It is primarily in cities that a nation s cultural traditions are preserved and generated 50
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People should keep trying to reach their goals even if they seem impossible to achieve Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 50
- In times of an economic crisis in which area should governments reduce its spending 1 Arts 2 Scientific research 3 Parks and public gardens 58
- Claim Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system Reason Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts or minds 50
- It is more harmful to compromise one s own beliefs than to adhere to them 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59620596206 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66372433244 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509485094851 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4099298435 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1336406298 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383260938851 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707793572223 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870834741008 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708582812898 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.