If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
The statement made is justifiable in few cases but as the statement is made by an implication of “all or nothing” which can’t be fully supported. Goals differ from person to person. One can’t come to a conclusion that this is good or that is good. Each set goals according to their state of mind. But then living in a society makes it public. That is you should be aware of the things you do, it can’t be against the norms of the society. Every person is free to set goals, but what matters is your path! Which means, how you are going to achieve it defines it all.
Building up, setting a goal is an independent choice. People take different paths to get their goals fulfilled, not all paths are acceptable by the society. For example, a person has set a goal to get a good score in his semester examinations, which is noble and every student’s primary goal. Now what matters is what path u take, if the student studies for 15 hours a day and tries his best to achieve a good score in the semester then nothing like it. If the same student gets indulged into malpractices and tries to get the same score then it is surely an offensive act.
Contrastingly, one can’t come to a conclusion regarding the topic. Considering another example, the steps taken by the American government to kill Osama Bin Laden were fearful, but any step taken by the government to achieve that goal could be right as the execution of Osama was important at that point, as he was the cause for hundreds of deaths.
It depends on how necessary it is. Goals set for one’s benefit majorly are centrifuged to a point that the path chosen is not supposed to be offensive. But when it comes to the benefit of masses it can go the way best chosen by the community. Unless and until you not offending a person or regulating the rules for your personal benefit it is acceptable.
To sum up, the statement seems true at a point but is an “all or nothing” case, so one can not conclude anything on it.
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- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. 58
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- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. 58
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 50
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[10]
Message: The pronoun is must be used with 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ving in a society makes it public. That is you should be aware of the things you d...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217889908257 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.172018348624 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0665137614679 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0275229357798 0.0497285424764 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.052752293578 0.0444667217837 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0871559633028 0.12292977631 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0389908256881 0.0406280797675 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70371999743 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0366972477064 0.030933414821 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0045871559633 0.0016655270985 275% => OK
Determiners: 0.116972477064 0.0997080785238 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183486238532 0.0249443105267 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206422018349 0.0148568991511 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2024.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 366.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53005464481 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.265027322404 0.366273622748 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215846994536 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150273224044 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109289617486 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70371999743 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494535519126 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 52.3764855285 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8755439534 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.35 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 39.8846994536 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.36363636364 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269835703395 0.391690518653 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0748189040106 0.123202303941 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0879308512982 0.077325440228 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498667682733 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205343050377 0.149214159877 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104950536151 0.161403998019 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468044101821 0.0892212321368 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290496488766 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0477701599504 0.0692045440612 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159457010853 0.275328986314 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544589542146 0.0653680567796 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.