Success consist of goal. By success in an area, we one step closer to our goal. A famous quote by Stevensen," How many time you fall is not worthy, how many time you get up and fight back is a matter of thing". To attain goal we should do whatever forward us is a whimsical choice by authors. Rather than, in my opinion we should do what we would like to do, but there is of course some valid and qualified rules to follow.
Firstly, we know, "Honesty is the best policy". Reward is ready for honest means and also infamy is the result for dishonest means. An honest thinker would think, to get her/his friends pen surreptitiously is not a matter of dishonesty but in our common judgement it also cast to infamy. For instance, In Bangladesh there is an acute phenomena to get the help of some unethical and greedy educational institutions for certificate, degree forgery by means of money. In recent report by an esteem newspaper reveal this gruesome secret. And the people whoever associate this matter got incarceration and banned their all educational certificates. Then where the goal of forgery is going? Simply in the end it is fruitless without morality and ethical standard.
Secondly, in order to get quick success some people try many ways. For example, in Bangladesh, BCS is the most promising job exam for job seeker. A report has been published by country's newspaper that, a group of students used electronic devices during exam and became BCS cadre. After proving the incident by country's supreme court, all employees job has been fired and rebuked them and also eliminated them from participating any government job exam. In parallel example, an athlete in football game, named Diego Maradona who has banned from participating for future game for using different energy promoting drugs-that violates football games ethics.
However, in a civil and lawful way any success attempt would praiseworthy and desirable. In history of mankind such attempts is myriads. For instance, In football game, the star player of Argentina named Lionel Messi,tried the the beginning of his life to become a footballer. He passed an arduous journey behind his goal, he failed many time due to his weak health and indigent but he did not give up. In stead he messed his grit and determined in his goal and now he is enjoying his fruit and world recognition of star player in the football game history.
In conclusion, behind any true goal there is always should be ethical and lawful support. Without tarnishing one's reputation, one should run his goal in a constructive way, that is valid and good for mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
Goal is consist of success. By success in an area, we o...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...to our goal. A famous quote by Stevensen,' How many time you fall is not worthy, ...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... A famous quote by Stevensen,' How many time you fall is not worthy, how many time y...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...w many time you fall is not worthy, how many time you get up and fight back is a matter o...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
...stance, In Bangladesh there is an acute phenomena to get the help of some unethical and g...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tried
...r player of Argentina named Lionel Messi,tried the the beginning of his life to become...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...r of Argentina named Lionel Messi,tried the the beginning of his life to become a footb...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...r of Argentina named Lionel Messi,tried the the beginning of his life to become a footb...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... and lawful support. Without tarnishing ones reputation, one should run his goal in ...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a constructive way" with adverb for "constructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nes reputation, one should run his goal in a constructive way, that is valid and good for mankind. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., that is valid and good for mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8970917226 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78658673608 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552572706935 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 4.38483146067 388% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9125080996 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.56 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.88 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112438190476 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303657301298 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322005644407 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619363043077 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269383558943 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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