Our society has been developing at an increased speed. Our pace of life has become faster than our ancestors’. Though life has become more convenient with the introductions of new technologies and luxurious, many advent problems have occurred. I agree that the increased speed of life has brought more problems to contemporary society, but it also has also cast some benign effects on people.
The rapid pace of life is often considered as one of the factors that cause mental illness and stress. Some professions are directly impacted by the pace of life in their communities, such as journalists and businessmen. A society that is operating at a high speed perhaps generate more activities and interactions. To inform events and outcomes of activities, journalism is probably one of the most efficient ways to spread the word. Therefore, journalists would have more events and stories to cover. Increased human interactions also mean some potential business deal forming among people, at the micro and macro level. To keep track of the business trade deal and ensure every transaction is legal, investors and accountants are required to work longer hours. A constant and high stressed environment can cause mental problems for people. And this type of environment is usually an outcome of rapid lifestyle.
An increased pace of life also causes difficulty to practice self-care. An accelerated life is usually filled with schedules, especially for people who work in big cities. People live on a daily basis from one errand to the next. When works and errands take up most of the time in someone’s life, there isn’t much space for someone to think for themselves, to distress, and to have long-term plans. Faster lifestyle also distracts people from concentrating on their current task. This environment also penetrates to students’ lives. A faster pace of academic life indicates more subjects to study. All the required studies and assignments might dry up students’ leisure time to develop their interests. Thus, they might lose opportunities to discover their passions.
Besides many adverse effects, the speedy lifestyle makes communication more expedite. Because of this increasing life pace, people are forced to be more diligent in their jobs. One-click purchase an item online then someone will deliver to your door the next day. This convenient experience of online shopping is a result of the current speed of life.
Summing it up, although the speedy function of society has addressed some issues and brought us conveniences in many aspects, it also takes up people’s free time in self-developments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sually an outcome of rapid lifestyle. An increased pace of life also causes di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33095238095 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01887486362 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.514559699 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9259259259 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14814814815 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287784220657 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772857979199 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081678584992 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153250945613 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904610695707 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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