I agree with the idea that it is possible, and desirable for society to pass laws that control or place limits on people's behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds. In my view, there are many convincing reasons why legislation cannot reform human nature.
One reason for my fundamental agreement with the idea is that people sometimes are not comfortable with legislation for reforming human nature, For example, imagine government harsh laws for gays to reform their nature, They can not tolerate living in that country because they are born with emotion that is paradoxical to their bodies, therefore they decide to leave their country to live comfortably. But these laws can not best solution, the government can ban them from adopting a child or control their high-risk behaviors.
Another essential reason why I agree with the idea is that issues about human nature. If be honest, I think that children are miniature examples of adults but according to scientific and phycological evidence this assumption is not true and other factors can affect human personality. I recently read an article claiming that human nature depends not only on the environment but also on inheritance. Parental genetics play an important role in their children's nature, scientists believe that parental genetics is one of the factors that affect human emotion, behavior, and personality. So when some factors similar to parental genetic effects on children's personality, the government can not reform their nature by legislation. In fact, for reforming human nature, they should be done much impressive reform such as modifying people's genetics.
- Laws should not be rigid or fixed Instead they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places
- Laws should not be rigid or fixed Instead they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places 100
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 70
- It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours 66
- People are too quick to take action instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do 10
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...to live comfortably. But these laws can not best solution, the government can ban them f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in fact, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 270.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73127745628 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.3160420748 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323274978025 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15448115669 0.0831039109588 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170115483927 0.0758088955206 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280759837558 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23365139348 0.0667264976115 350% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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