It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The speaker asserts that the way to define ourselves is through our identification with social groups. It is true that social groups is so different that people cannot identify it easily. However, as a human being, people must find out who they are. Therefore, Identification with social groups is the only way that we can realize who we are. I strongly agree with the speaker.
To begin with, since human being lives in social context, social identification, which can help us recognize ourselves, is necessary. As a social animals, human is relating to his or her social relationships, such as colleague, classmate, and family. And this means that human have different roles in the social context. In order to find their direction of life, human must find out what kinds of roles they play in the society. For example, students must find out what they need, and develop themselves through education. After graduated, students can engage in what they like or what they want to do, such as being a lawyer, an engineer, or a doctor. Without social identification, human cannot realize who they are.
Further, human will benefit from identifying characteristics of social groups, through which they can understand themselves better. For example, when attending the schools, students search for a club. With clubs, schools can combine same kinds of students, whereas students can find out their merits in the clubs. In the clubs, students could be a director, a member belonging to event planning, or a member belonging to public relations department. Through identifying their roles in the club, students can know what kind of roles they like because it can be analogy to vocation. In sum, human can benefit from identifying their social groups.
On the other hand, the things that people could not identify social groups has a negative effect on themselves. If people is incapable of knowing what is their roles in the society, they will lose their way, even become unfamiliar with themselves. For instance, Lobo Wolf Girl, a girl was seen running on all fours alongside a pack of wolves going after a herd of goats. Due to lacking ability to identify herself in the social context, she was unable to exhibit a human’s characteristics. In brief, because people live in society, they must find out their identification in the society.
To sum up, human realize themselves through identification with social groups. And human can benefit from social groups. Whereas if people cannot recognize their identification in society, they will lose the direction of life. So, I totally agree what the speaker says.
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..., which can help us recognize ourselves, is necessary. As a social animals, human...
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... has a negative effect on themselves. If people is incapable of knowing what is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in brief, kind of, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78904602287 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444186046512 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7105161544 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1111111111 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9259259259 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153322315205 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571068495998 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586188760198 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110548741908 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607715020361 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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