It is said that the people who do not confront the past also can not embrace the future. In most of ocassions, the acknowledgement of the past can help people when they need to make significant decisions presently. Viewing through the history of human beings, people learned a lot from it(indeed the one who did not take lesson from the past failed at great cost). As the most powerful emprical reference, knowing about the past would be favorable to us. I will address my views with three points.
To begin with, we should discuss the meaning of important decisions of people today. For most of us, there are lots of times in daily life we need to make decisions, hence we need the suggestions. On one hand, people can turn to help of others like parents, teachers as well as friends. On the other hand, the experince of the past would also be a teacher who could tell us what happened in this conditon before, What was the result and whether it would be the same case which in front of people to make a decisions. When it goes to the important ones, the decisions like which University to apply or which offer of job one should take, these are all need to be considerated carefully, hence the past history or to be specific, the past experince and statictics like the Universities' rank or the companies' operating condtion are all siginificant reference to one to make the choice which is important to them.
In additon, the knowledge of the past save lives.Here is the story of my father. When he was at University, he unfortunately met the most controversial students movements in China thirty years ago, in late 1980s. Maybe you heard of it a bit, the Tianan Men Square where thouands of students made parade to fight for corruptions and freedom. His friends called him to go with them to that place. While of cousre my father's history tutor knew this early. The tutor just aksed my father to stay at library and do not go to Beijing, where the students' parade even made the atuthority bring the tanks the make regular order and peace. In the end some case happened and you can go to the Wikipedia to search the details while my father was sound and safe. I really appreciate the histories' tuor's perception as in this eyes, the histories of the past were always share the same result.
Finally, there are some areas where no reference of the past could learn from, so people have to strive a new way to go. Beside the scientific area where there are lots of unknown fields, let's discuss the open policy in China, proposed by Deng Xiaoping in 1978. Firstly, the prosperity and rapid development which even worries the western countries in China is the main outcome of the open policy. As a socialism country, it was hard for people to embrace capitalism initially, while thanks to Deng Xiaoping, who designed a new policy that no country had practiced then, he combined the features of capitalism and socialism into this policy. In details, it reformed the political system and open to the foreign invsetors and companies to help Chinese economy. On this political way that never appeared before, More and more Chinese people to become rich now.
- TOEFL T P O 46 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- The following is a letter to the editor of the Waymarsh Times."Traffic here in Waymarsh is becoming a problem. Although just three years ago a state traffic survey showed that the typical driving commuter took 20 minutes to get to work, the commute now ta 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decision' or simply 'decisions'?
Suggestion: a decision; decisions
...e case which in front of people to make a decisions. When it goes to the important ones, th...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Here
...n, the knowledge of the past save lives.Here is the story of my father. When he was ...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lled him to go with them to that place. While of cousre my fathers history tutor knew...
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Line 5, column 808, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...te the histories tuors perception as in this eyes, the histories of the past were al...
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Line 5, column 857, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'shared'.
Suggestion: shared
..., the histories of the past were always share the same result. Finally, there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, so, then, well, while, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2600.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65949820789 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50855859555 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494623655914 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9670063293 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218264902249 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543795078777 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456169177608 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119069155086 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048184562752 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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