It is stated that knowing about past cannot help people to make important decision today. In my opinion, past is some thing an history or collective information on which come to take decision.It is stated that world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past.Time is considered as money and people more and more busy with their lives. Individual life become an more complex compared to earlier past year. In my opinion I disagree with given stated claim and reason.
let us look towards claim, today in field either it science, medical, engineering field. Past history, collective information on which recent changes or any conclusion to be drawn. In Scientific research are yearlier result are taken into consideration every time before concluding any analysis, it's after all decision which may have impact for next few years.
Another example,In an family two brother one younger and another one is elder brother. so during an academic year elder brother fail in some attempt of examination. so ready made example for younger child. so knowing about his elder brother past and mistakes, so he can pass certain examination with good score. so here example shows an decision matter
lot in every situation of life.
considering an reason taken in to consideration with claim, Even though world today is more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past. Time is considered as money, so no one have time think in deeply, analayes the think. so that error or mistake may avoided result is shown in appropriate manner.
Complexity may also leads to words an confusion in taking in important decision. If even if there are number of option in front of some one, he may have some confusion in selecting option it come to altogether towards past or history.
To sum up with all, even though complexity in world today shown, one can not neglect past while taking important decision.after all result or decision may held the impact with next several year.
- The effectiveness of a country s leaders is best measured by examining the well being of that country s citizens Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position 58
- The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep th 55
- The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Health Naturally a small but expanding chain of stores selling health food and other health related products Our previous experience has been that our stores are most profitable in ar 59
- The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of Bargain Brand Cereals One year ago we introduced our first product Bargain Brand breakfast cereal Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top selling cereal companies Alth 70
- Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talent and interest when choosing a field of study Others believe that college students base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
... decision today. In my opinion, past is some thing an history or collective information on...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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...oday. In my opinion, past is some thing an history or collective information on wh...
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...ormation on which come to take decision.It is stated that world today is significa...
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Suggestion: Time
... was even in the relatively recent past.Time is considered as money and people more ...
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...ith their lives. Individual life become an more complex compared to earlier past y...
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... with given stated claim and reason. let us look towards claim, today in field e...
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...ry time before concluding any analysis, its after all decision which may have impac...
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...t for next few years. Another example,In an family two brother one younger and a...
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...r next few years. Another example,In an family two brother one younger and anot...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'brother' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'brethren', 'brothers'.
Suggestion: brethren; brothers
...rs. Another example,In an family two brother one younger and another one is elder br...
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...unger and another one is elder brother. so during an academic year elder brother f...
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...er fail in some attempt of examination. so ready made example for younger child. s...
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...o ready made example for younger child. so knowing about his elder brother past an...
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...o ready made example for younger child. so knowing about his elder brother past an...
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...ss certain examination with good score. so here example shows an decision matter ...
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...ss certain examination with good score. so here example shows an decision matter ...
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... with good score. so here example shows an decision matter lot in every situatio...
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...so here example shows an decision matter lot in every situation of life. consi...
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...er lot in every situation of life. considering an reason taken in to consideration wit...
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...every situation of life. considering an reason taken in to consideration with c...
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...one have time think in deeply, analayes the think. so that error or mistake may avoided r...
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...me think in deeply, analayes the think. so that error or mistake may avoided resul...
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Suggestion: word
...manner. Complexity may also leads to words an confusion in taking in important dec...
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.... Complexity may also leads to words an confusion in taking in important decisi...
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...n taking in important decision. If even if there are number of option in front of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
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... there are number of option in front of some one, he may have some confusion in selectin...
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Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
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...e some confusion in selecting option it come to altogether towards past or history. ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'several years'.
Suggestion: several years
... decision may held the impact with next several year.
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...held the impact with next several year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, while, after all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99404761905 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6187770423 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.4109536489 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406705782156 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123829758638 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167214710349 0.0758088955206 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175486855442 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170984049884 0.0667264976115 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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