The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Although many people believe that luxuries and conviniences make our lives better, I believe that they hinder people from advancing into strong and independent individuals.
First, those who inherited thier ancestral opulence, do not know the struggle behind earning such wealth. Unlike poor people who are constantly worried for their next meal, rich people do not have to worry about their daily living. However, chances are more that extant luxuries might encourage prodigious spending and soon an individual can become insolvent. Since, he has not faced poverty before he might get into depression or suicide attempts.
Second, it can happen that comfort of luxuries might limit an individual from striving hard to achieve his goal. For instance, a common man who has to work hard to earn his daily bread is more determined in his life. He does not have an option to run away from real world problems. On the other hand, chances are more that if a rich man encounters any issue in his work or life, he can just get away from it with his money or he can just run away from it.
Moreover, one cannot deny that those who have their own family bussiness or company or industry, force their kid to take it's ownership at later point in time. They constantly underemine true passion of their kids. Most of such kids, on the other hand, do not even attempt to persue their passion.
In summary, luxuries and conveniences help to improve quality of living. But, based on above facts, one can say that they cannot make a strong and independent individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
.... Unlike poor people who are constantly worried for their next meal, rich people do not hav...
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Line 8, column 165, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... ownership at later point in time. They constantly underemine true passion of their kids. Most of suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 267.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85767790262 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41736436911 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6814750555 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113898440846 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389188491555 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439306856157 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740988596421 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575504332966 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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