Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
There has always been a debate as to whether men and women are capable of doing the same tasks. In fact, there's a common saying that what a man can do, a woman can do better. This raises the question as to whether this quote is generalistic or specific. The prompt suggests that because of the inherent physical differences between men and women, they are not equally capable of performing the same tasks. In my opinion. I strongly agree for two reasons which I shall discuss in more detail
First, the physical structure between men and women are so obviously different. We can tell from this that men and women cannot have the same capabilities. In terms of physical strength, men tend to be stronger than women. For instance, if we observe certain physical contact sports such as football, we can see how men are more agile in their movement compared to women. Men tend to be more aggressive when attacking or defending while playing. This goes to show that man have a stronger physical physique when compared to women. That could be the reason why football sport is more popular among men than women. Women, because of their physique, are sometimes not as agile as men. To drive this point home, we can consider the record holder for the fastest person in the world. You guessed right, it's a man! If men and women could perform the same tasks equally, then most sports like football and basketball would have been a mixture of both men and women.
Furthermore, if we consider most leaders in the world today, we would observe that those positions are mostly occupied by men. This raises the question about the capability of women to hold those positions. Women tend to hold obscure roles such as assistants, secretaries just to mention a few. For example, on the home front. the man is considered the head of the home. This is how it has always been since agos past and has definitely spilt over to those who occupy leadership positions in the society we find ourselves in today. It can be said that men occupy more leadership positions because they tend to be more logical and rational when dealing with certain issues. Women tend to be Irrational and sentimental in this regard. In fact, women are more emotionally developed than men. They are constantly in touch with their feelings. Hence, they might find it harder to deal with difficult issues that requir sound logical reasoning.
However, some may argue that men and women deserve equal rights. I don't believe this would ever happen. We can only say men and women should be given fair rights due to them.
Again I stand by the assertion that men and women will never be able to perform the same tasks equally
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
There has always been a debate as to whether men and women are capable of doing the ...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...pable of doing the same tasks. In fact, theres a common saying that what a man can do,...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: WHETHER[2]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
... do, a woman can do better. This raises the question as to whether this quote is generalistic or specific....
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Line 3, column 799, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...person in the world. You guessed right, its a man! If men and women could perform t...
^^^
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... a few. For example, on the home front. the man is considered the head of the home....
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
...me may argue that men and women deserve equal rights. I dont believe this would ever ...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t men and women deserve equal rights. I dont believe this would ever happen. We can ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69639065817 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37883664442 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486199575372 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3872917306 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7333333333 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23333333333 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250912538783 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698672611112 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054566873609 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145042048541 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301274238824 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.