The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Youths has been always considered the future building blocks of a nation. Hence, the society tried to mould into fine individuals but today's youth are exposed to a rife of deleterious distractions that they tend to deviate from what is actually expected from them. There is no doubt that there is a small percentage of them who still grew up to be the ideal individual but the rest of the youth indulge themselves into various unhealthy as well as unethical situations.
In almost all the immoral happenings, including drinking, smoking, taking drugs etc youths are involved. Drugs smuggling, abuse, riots etc are given catalysed by youths only. Internet was expected to be the storehouse of information but none has ever mentioned, good or bad but youths are generally found to be searching mostly the bad thing, drugs, bomb-making, sex etc. Some had even indulged themselves with many illegal things over the internet. so today's youth no more hold the pride to be called as the key to the society.
secondly, it is important to focus on the matter that, youths are easily attracted toward other, according to them superior, cultures, practices etc. for example in India, most of the youths try to shape themselves according to the western culture and end up generating something else. They try to emulate the western dressing, western lifestyle etc, but due to lack of proper exposure and society make them look inferior. Hence youths cannot be analysed to get the proper understanding of the contemporary culture.
One may argue that in western culture youths are the most effective way to understand the contemporary culture. In that regard, what about today's teenage problems? which include drinking, fighting, making clamor, drugs, road accidents. It seems as if youth started liking unwanted things and breaking rules resulting in stress among parents, family, and neighbours, pain for the police hospitalisations, destruction of property, reckless driving etc.
To sum up, today's youth have forgotten their age-old tradition and culture. They have even indulged themselves in various crimes. They even do not know exactly how to cook their traditional foods. Therefore the trend of the youth in today's time in not the accurate way to understand the contemporary culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
Youths has been always considered the future building blocks o...
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Suggestion: So
... many illegal things over the internet. so todays youth no more hold the pride to ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Suggestion: Secondly
...e called as the key to the society. secondly, it is important to focus on the matter...
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: Which
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...ction of property, reckless driving etc. To sum up, todays youth have forgotten t...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ly how to cook their traditional foods. Therefore the trend of the youth in todays time i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229116945107 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.183770883055 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0978520286396 0.0880659088768 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.054892601432 0.0497285424764 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0381861575179 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0954653937947 0.12292977631 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0644391408115 0.0406280797675 159% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76785457364 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0453460620525 0.030933414821 147% => OK
Particles: 0.00715990453461 0.0016655270985 430% => OK
Determiners: 0.0763723150358 0.0997080785238 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00477326968974 0.0249443105267 19% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0119331742243 0.0148568991511 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2291.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 369.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.20867208672 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39837398374 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289972899729 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214092140921 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159891598916 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76785457364 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590785907859 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 69.2964631555 55.4138127331 125% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.45 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5036649181 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.55 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.674092028746 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 47.4472899729 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.40517241379 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510764605185 0.391690518653 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107818888572 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0734022236356 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50607937982 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148043587814 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178693356891 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147891979077 0.0892212321368 166% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331598554583 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0395020729302 0.0692045440612 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329437126889 0.275328986314 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499172304425 0.0653680567796 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.30420353982 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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