A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
I truly believe in the right to equality, in this case, the right to have the same curriculum. Every child should be given the opportunity to learn the same thing irrespective of their location or background.
The same curriculum doesn’t imply that the student should not be given the electives to choose from. The opportunity should be same, left up to the child to groom their interest in it through proper guidance from the mentors and teachers.
The same national curriculum should be there for all, but it does have many challenges that need to be resolved for it to be possible.
Firstly, all the schools public or private should have competent teachers who can provide the students the much-needed knowledge. Having the same subjects without the same level of teaching and understanding will only make it worse for the students who lack good faculty.
The secondary challenge will be the infrastructure of the school and the global reach it has, these two are very important for the overall development of the student. Extra-curricular should be encouraged from the very childhood, apart from studies the student should be trained in one or more of the activities of their choice be it sports, music, dancing etc.
The government should also play an important role in providing the scholarship to students with a low financial background. How can a poor student attend a school which has the same national curriculum, good teachers, and high fee? Even if the curriculum in all the schools is same,
it becomes impossible for a child to avail the same education, without the financial support to attend the school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1206, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...d they will be at a great disadvantage. According to me, a uniform curriculum at all places mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, of course, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3344.0 2235.4752809 150% => OK
No of words: 686.0 442.535393258 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87463556851 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11777311996 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73377370807 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411078717201 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1071.9 704.065955056 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.601971475 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3783783784 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5405405405 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16216216216 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296085763881 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077544228139 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597675011501 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178817835676 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432403707615 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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