Looking at the current human action, one can say with a clinch that environment is going through its worst period. Authors claim that that nations should pass the law to preserve the remaining areas in their natural state is cogent as well as sensible. Nations should not only pass the law but make severe and diffuse it every common man. Nation should everything it can to inculcate these laws to people.
In some nations like India, people consider nature as their mother, but never bother to deface it. Human cupidity is going beyond the limit. For the reason of economic growth they marring the already endangered environmental situation. People are not abreast of what cost they or their successors have to pay for these actions. Cities like Mumbai,Delhi,New York known as center for economic growth, but people have made them a forest of concrete. Lack of wilder areas increased the population in these cities. Around 1.2 million died in Delhi from last 3 years suffering from pollution. Increase in deforestation and acquiring wilder land for development caused increase in temperature because of global warming. This has also lead to the culmination of wild life. Once country like India known for tigers now have only 1000 tigers alive. Many researchers and scientist have predicted that if this continues it will be soon deleterious to mankind.
Economic development is necessary and increase in population in metropolitan increases the population needs, but destroying the environment is not solution for that. Government and local authorities can take a action to enhance the existing usage of lands and other natural resources. It should not be allowed to anyone to harm wilder areas or to destroy the greenery without having substantiated reason.
Many countries are taking initiative to reduce this destruction of wilder areas. A good example of this is Bhutan, which is the only one carbon negative country in the world. Bhutan has reserved its 60% of land for forests. People in Bhutan plant around 1 lac tress every year to celebrate the birthday of their prince and now considered as happiest country in the world. Countries are celebrating world enviroment day and made amendment in their laws . People in nation should understand that they should respect for People in tomorrow.
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- "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition." - Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or dis 58
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279805352798 0.240241500013 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.16301703163 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0729927007299 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036496350365 0.0497285424764 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0389294403893 0.0444667217837 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133819951338 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0583941605839 0.0406280797675 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68987228313 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316301703163 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0802919708029 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243309002433 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00729927007299 0.0148568991511 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2311.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 377.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1299734748 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.405835543767 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26525198939 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180371352785 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127320954907 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68987228313 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564986737401 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 64.5571794601 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7083333333 23.380412469 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8796948747 59.4972553346 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2916666667 141.124799967 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7083333333 23.380412469 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.291666666667 0.674092028746 43% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 42.2335322723 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.97959183673 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344506315291 0.391690518653 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0856651314361 0.123202303941 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0534422520743 0.077325440228 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.402843402497 0.547984918172 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125240959714 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109540422849 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576948682691 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291732937098 0.385218514788 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.047814628111 0.0692045440612 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243489449176 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00856178453919 0.0653680567796 13% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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