“No matter what the situation, it is more harmful to compromise one’s beliefs than to adhere to them.”
In today's world, there are disparate people, religions, traditions, customs, etc. Due to the diversity, different individuals have different and everyone mostly encounters few things which go against his practices or thought process. In such a case, what should a person do? compromise or follow his own belief. The prompt recommends that giving up one's belief is hazardous than following his thoughts. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the statement and argue that one should not compromise on his or her values due to the following reasons.
Firstly, as the saying goes, "Neven compromise, not even in the face of armageddon", humans in most cases should stick their own thoughts or ethics. If we compromise our beliefs for the sake of others, we may have to regret the decision later. For instance, if somebody wants to do something really great like making a flying car, or build intelligent machines and they believe they can achieve it, they should never go back on that. Such pathbreaking things like a flying car, or building electric vehicles usually require a lot of time and one goes through a lot of pains to achieve it as they require a lot of effort. In their journey, such people might encounter many failures and heartbreaks and other people may force them to give as the other people think what sich creators are doing is impossible. In such cases, the person working on the flying car or any invention should not compromise no matter how bleak the future may seem to him and should continue his work. If they gave up on their beliefs, we would have missed on lot of interesting inventions like airplanes, computers, automobiles, etc. Therefore, one should never compromise on his beliefs given he is doing the right thing
However, there might be times where one's belief can be wrong and might go against the principles of a country or a community. In such cases, they should compromise on their belief as what they are doing is morally incorrect and does more harm than good. For instance, in ancient India, there is an inhumane practice named 'Sati sahagaman' where if the husband dies, they advocate wife should also be followed while lighting the pyre. This was practiced in the past as it was their belief and their tradition. But few broad-minded social reformers like Mr. Raja Ram Mohan Roy, Mr. Veresalingam fought against that practice and worked day and night to abolish such inhumane activity. In such cases, if the elders did not compromise and did not give up their belief, it would have done more harm than good and many innocent young women have to die for something meaningless. Therefore if somebody's ideas or practices harms another, one should not hesitate to compromise
In conclusion, it is cardinal for an individual to stick to his or her own belief and follow that given it does not physically or mentally harm another person and does not go against the constitution or rules and regulations of the country. One should be flexible in revising their beliefs and must readily give up if it is for the greater good. Doing otherwise would bring more harm than good. But whenever one is faced with the decision of taking the hard way or the easy way, one should follow his or her morals and should not compromise on what one wants to achieve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Compromise
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Suggestion:
...ue to the following reasons. Firstly, as the saying goes, 'Neven compromi...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... However, there might be times where ones belief can be wrong and might go agains...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... have to die for something meaningless. Therefore if somebodys ideas or practices harms a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2731.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81657848325 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60858306447 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47442680776 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5632436591 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.739130435 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.652173913 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73913043478 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254170695887 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803658897677 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716895793643 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169288942492 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044551375824 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.