Technology is omnipresent in our everyday life. Some devices such as smartphone are become part of the human body. Many argue that advance of technology showing detrimental effects on our thinking capabIlities, but it is also helping humans to learn and thing about things because development of internet and smartphone.
Firstly, improvement technology helps for developing creative thing because it improves your reach to the creative things. The growth of internet provides access to films from all over the globe. Anyone can view film from one corner of the world. Due to such accessibIlity, viewers can get in touch with advancement of animation, music, different use of camera angles, and contents. Newcomers can implements such things in their films. Readers can also read books from all over the globe using kindle or using various websites. Using such development, they can improve their knowledge. Painters can acess all the paintings from web browsers to implement new methods in their paintings. Improvement in technology surely increasing the range of aesthetics so that they can improve their skills.
Furthermore, technology advancement also aiding social awareness in the society because it made communication eassier. A person in south america can easily address the group of people in asia and can make them aware of his problems through effective social media sites. Amazon deforestation is good example of it. Many people watched various videos of such deforestation and raised voice against it. Because of such reaction, Brazil government is going to take action. Social media communication also helped many groups all over the earth to solve their human right issues. Due to development of technology, people to people contact is increasing resulting in awareness about social issues such as deforestation, human right issues, and human trafficking.
Finally, technology evolution is making humans mundane work very easier. So now, humans can focus on more critical issues. Technological advancement is also creating some new problems like pollution, global warming, and rapid urbanization. Humans are fighting with such problems, and they are thinking about innovative solutions to confront them. Now humans are also thinking about space exploration. For that, people are making state of the art machines. Humans are thinking about tackling invincible diseases to improve health of the people. Because of above all factors, technology advancement opening new horizon for thinking.
In conclusion, beacause of all above points, techology is creating new frontiers for people for utilizing their congnitive and analytical abilities. It is now depend on the person to use technology fairly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 430, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...xploration. For that, people are making state of the art machines. Humans are thinking about tac...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ive and analytical abilities. It is now depend on the person to use technology fairly....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56490384615 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8689226592 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536057692308 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1308055222 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8275862069 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3448275862 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72413793103 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13053271592 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379189011525 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312360470127 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817688247862 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433955756058 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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