As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The given issue is more about the huaman and technology, firstly i would say that i have a conditional stand with the author, However technology helping us inn our daily rutine and for all the other things as well, but now we as a human are having more expectations with the machine and technology. Although we all know that we can make our life easy with the machines and save a alot of time as well as efforts. at the same time we are relying more and more on the same. and that is affecting in both the ways, like positively and negatively. with the given topic we can surely say, that humans are relying more on technology to solve problems, the ability to think for themselves is surely deterioate. Now in this case i totally support to the given thought but at same time i would like to oppose it.
No doubt, our ability of thinking is deteriorate, but at the same time it helps us to reduce the time and human efforts. many times it happens that we put a lot of effort and hundreds of human workinh hours to build something new that save comapines capital and gives the best result. but there is very less possibility to get success in this.
at this case technology helps us to make the decisions for the better future and growth.
Although, technology helps us in many cases and in worst situations and the same time we have a lot of cons for this, will se them in the futher example that would like to mension here. many comapanies are getting hell lot of profites and growth by acquiring the latest machines and technology in result lot of employee lossing their jobs. and being as a human we want all the things to get done very easily and that is only thing we are relying more on this. and losses the ability of thinking. technologhy is not the thing is responsible for this. only we can not decide our priorites and the limit of thing which helps ous.
If we think that how much the technology is important for ous and and if we set some limitations for this. surly we can tackle any situatios in our daily rutine and make the perfect decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bout the huaman and technology, firstly i would say that i have a conditional sta...
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Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ur life easy with the machines and save a alot of time as well as efforts. at the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...save a alot of time as well as efforts. at the same time we are relying more and m...
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Suggestion: And
... are relying more and more on the same. and that is affecting in both the ways, lik...
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Suggestion: With
...e ways, like positively and negatively. with the given topic we can surely say, that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bility to think for themselves is surely deterioate. Now in this case i totally s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e i totally support to the given thought but at same time i would like to oppose ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to the given thought but at same time i would like to oppose it. No doubt, our...
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Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
.... No doubt, our ability of thinking is deteriorate, but at the same time it helps us to re...
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Suggestion: Many
...s to reduce the time and human efforts. many times it happens that we put a lot of e...
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Suggestion: But
...ines capital and gives the best result. but there is very less possibility to get s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...ss possibility to get success in this. at this case technology helps us to make t...
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Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
..., technology helps us in many cases and in worst situations and the same time we have a ...
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Suggestion: Many
...xample that would like to mension here. many comapanies are getting hell lot of prof...
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Suggestion: And
...ult lot of employee lossing their jobs. and being as a human we want all the things...
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Suggestion: And
...only thing we are relying more on this. and losses the ability of thinking. technol...
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Suggestion: Technologhy
...is. and losses the ability of thinking. technologhy is not the thing is responsible for thi...
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Suggestion: Only
... not the thing is responsible for this. only we can not decide our priorites and the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...uch the technology is important for ous and and if we set some limitations for this. su...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Surly
...nd if we set some limitations for this. surly we can tackle any situatios in our dail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, no doubt, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38020833333 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3738118373 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4609375 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7142670401 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203157314786 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744691806237 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833144414824 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113249180241 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617928994445 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.1639044944 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.