People normally try to take decisions based on their inner feelings but not all the time it will give good feedback. So in other words to make proper judgement or give proper decision you have to think logically not emotionally.
A logical person is always respected and valued because they will predict what would be the right choice for any decision. Additionally, they make hardly mistake to their thinking as they use logic not emotion.
For example: if i need to take decision from two students whom i choose for my company then i would rather take decision logically. Because if any poor student who haven't have qualification for the post should not be taken by seeing his/her poverty rather the decision should be taken according to the policy or logic. Though you may have temporary done some benevolent act by giving a job to that student but in the long run your emotional decision could be burdensome.
Emotion should be placed along with reasoning so that the decision can be perfect. A perfect decision will affect both the parties. However, a leader who takes decision based on inner feelings will not be always accepted by his peers. It can put adverse effect in his leadership and he will be termed as a poor decision maker. There was a saying "think before you do anything, not after you do". So, people who are sentimental sometimes made huge mistake because they forgot the logical view and this will cause major problems.
In conclusion, any decision just has to be checked through logically not emotionally. It may look bold to discard feeling or emotions but it will be good in the long run who make decision based on logical explanation.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 75
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- TOEFL T P O 2 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned wit 45
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85069444444 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56043606659 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8549674918 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360207822445 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138056917364 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687445439876 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218794406971 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866114310528 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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