People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Humans are considered to be one of the God's greatest creation, and the reason behind it, they have emotions. Sometimes, these emotions have the ability to either make it or break it your relations. Emotion is a natural tendency, and one can only feel it within, and hence react accordingly. People have to make balance between their minds and hearts, when it comes to deal with this so much powerful word called emotion, and in the process, people might end up making either better decisions, or worst which they have to regret for their whole life.
When it comes to your relationships, emotions have a very important role to play. Especially, if we talk about love and family. At such time, one cannot risk their relation with their loved ones by making decision based on mind. In such circumstances, people have to take decisions from their heart, and one never regrets their decision in such matters, because forgiveness is the key for the nourishment of your bonding with your partner or family. This strong feeling comes only from the very deep roots of your heart, and one do not have to justify anything afterwards.
However, if we talk about emotions relating our work life, then decision making matters more than anything. In such scenario, one cannot make excuse regarding a wrong decision.
For instance: if a manager requires to make a decision for the welfare of the company, he cannot take a judgement on the basis of emotions. In this case, an obscure judgement taken from heart rather than mind might end up with the company's loss. Decision making is crucial in such regards if it means that the manager have to fire some of the employees,e.g., if a company's revenue or shares are going down, the head of that company can't afford to keep all his employees employment intact for a long time. He has to make a tough decision at that point so that he don't have to regret afterwards.
Furthermore, it is true that people make decisions based on their current state of mind, or rather say emotion, and it completely depends on the situation of the time when one has to chose a side. Just like each coin has two sides, same way each decision has too. If your love life is on stake, you have to decide in the favour of the person you love, or you will loose him/her forever, but this situation is completely opposite when it comes to our work life.
Overall though, decision and emotion are on the same scale in terms of their importance in life, and hence good and poor decision making are also part of our lives. Even if we have to justify our wrong decision afterwards with logic, it doesn't make people poor decision makers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ot risk their relation with their loved ones by making decision based on mind. In su...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...n. For instance: if a manager requires to make a decision for the welfare of the compa...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... it means that the manager have to fire some of the employees,e.g., if a companys revenue o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , e
...nager have to fire some of the employees,e.g., if a companys revenue or shares are...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re going down, the head of that company cant afford to keep all his employees employ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tough decision at that point so that he dont have to regret afterwards. Furthermore...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...our of the person you love, or you will loose him/her forever, but this situation is ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...rong decision afterwards with logic, it doesnt make people poor decision makers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'e.g.', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'for instance', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239089184061 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.146110056926 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0664136622391 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0550284629981 0.0497285424764 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0777988614801 0.0444667217837 175% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11954459203 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0246679316888 0.0406280797675 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42915076338 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034155597723 0.030933414821 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00569259962049 0.0016655270985 342% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796963946869 0.0997080785238 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132827324478 0.0249443105267 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00948766603416 0.0148568991511 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2637.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 468.0 452.878318584 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63461538462 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292735042735 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209401709402 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141025641026 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0769230769231 0.132149295362 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42915076338 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.5867150939 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7545747293 59.4972553346 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.85 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.674092028746 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 44.3401709402 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.37414965986 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397557700689 0.391690518653 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104081324823 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682155271451 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542755701853 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17008217527 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138881601841 0.161403998019 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791590259967 0.0892212321368 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260416046722 0.385218514788 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101658592859 0.0692045440612 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233302731917 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850520740815 0.0653680567796 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.