People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
"Your behavior is your responsibility", one can find this line trite in several offices. No matter what the circumstances are, only you are the one to make call of how you present yourself. That is why the statement can be firmly refuted. Several explanaitons can be given against the statement.
What differentiates people from other people? To begin with, it is how they behave. And their behavior is majorly determined by the choices they make. People have a common cognition but their response differs, like some people can be tempted to chastise subordinates over a blunder while others might honestly point them their mistake and then cheer them up for not making such mistakes again. What seperates them is what they decide next, this is what is refered to as their behavior.
Moreover, what people think of themselves has a huge impact on people's behavior, you will find rich majorly egotist and philistine about others. On the other hand a poor guy can be more benign and kind.
Additionally, Internal peace plays an important role in deciding how people behave. You would normally find old people's behavior more mature than the teenagers.
Introspection largerly determines how one behaves, noting own's mistakes and finding out why we react in a particular way under certain circumstances helps us understand more about ourself.
However with support to the statement, one can say that external factors like past experiences also define how one behaves. Which is true. It is our experience that guides us in precarious situations, where the difference between right and wrong is obfuscated.
In addition to support of the statement we can also say the certain circumstances and people affect the way we behave. A girl might go crazy in presence her crush. Or, as it is known to many of us that hungry people tend to be more angry.
But at the end it is our decision to express or not to express those evanscent feelings.
Conclusively, it depends on us majorly how we behave. As stated above that external factors might impact our reactions and decisions but at the last it our call. We can let go of anger or any other malevolent feeling and behave in more genteel way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: experiences
... one can say that external factors like past experiences also define how one behaves. Which is t...
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...xperiences also define how one behaves. Which is true. It is our experience that guid...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... between right and wrong is obfuscated. In addition to support of the statement ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96495956873 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80835112557 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563342318059 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.740449438202 540% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2074513045 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4583333333 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194862246733 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544522371163 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512513540254 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761086205896 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557762347791 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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