Behavior refers to the organism action or reaction, direct or indirect, toward a stimulus, either it external forces or internal motivations. indubitably, Human behavior differs from animal behavior, because of the free well of the human and his ability to think about his actions and take decisions, this what make humankind prominent. While people behaviors are strongly influenced by their environments and external forces, it is erroneous to claim that people's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making.
Despite circumstances are out of our control, people tend to react differently if they were in the same situation. In other words, circumstances are the real tests which people go through in their daily lives, which curve their unique personalities according to their actions and reactions into external forces and their own motivations and emotions. For instance, Children from the same family, raised by the same parents, lived the same financial and social conditions, may react differently in the same situation, even before going to school and experiencing different conditions. Also, students in the same classroom and being taught by the same teacher may perform differently. Although there are other external factors affect their scores as well, still some students succeed in worst conditions.
While it is arduous to fight against dominant external factors, such as norms and traditions in a society, people have the free well to create their own way of living. Many people yield to the external forces and react according to the over. Few choose not to be controlled by these conditions and fight for their freedom to make their own decisions. For instance, Galileo, the father of the modern science, contradicted the dominant fact in his days that sun revolves around the earth, and he was discriminated for years from the church and the society. Years later, he was praised as one of the pioneers of the scientific revolution which contributed to many scientific facts and inventions.
Furthermore, claiming that person behaviors controlled by external forces make him unresponsible for his actions. People are aware of the consequences of their action. As result, people obey the rules of the community they live in, assuming people have no control over their actions and make them free of blame will encourage them to break the laws and ignore the rules.
At last, people behavior are widely affected by their environments and past experiences. At the same time, individuals are responsible for their own decisions and have to think about the consequences of their actions.
- Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your 54
- In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people. 75
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 58
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 66
- Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... action or reaction, direct or indirect, toward a stimulus, either it external f...
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... direct or indirect, toward a stimulus, either it external forces or internal mo...
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...xternal forces or internal motivations. indubitably, Human behavior differs from animal beh...
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...te circumstances are out of our control, people tend to react differently if they...
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...es as well, still some students succeed in worst conditions. While it is arduous to f...
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...o many scientific facts and inventions. Furthermore, claiming that person behavi...
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...dely affected by their environments and past experiences. At the same time, individuals are res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28162291169 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80988119977 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520286396181 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.202965665 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.944444444 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193400833289 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067582503346 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505302092543 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117737604695 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237095586691 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.