Any business establishment requires some sort of space to operate at. Given prompt suggests if citizens of a locality are against establishment of one such business, government should be in favor of citizens by not allowing a private organization to set up such business in that city. I strongly agree with the prompt and argue that a city is for it's citizens, hence there welfare should be of utmost priority.
In any city, It's important to cope up with the needs of constituent citizens of that locality. An incessant disturbance to their peace of mind should be avoided at any cost. Consider a city with families well settled. If a private company wants to open up a pub in city center, families with kids in their house will surely oppose to that. For instance, if a child is studying for his exam and if there is a loud noise coming out of pub, that will constantly irritate her and eventually frustrate from studying. Families might not want to raise their kids in the vicinity of a place were they are exposed to alcoholic habits every day. So when citizens object for such business establishment, Government should honor and perhaps suggest the company to do the business in a place were it's more appropriate.
Further, when a business establishment is made against the whim of it's surrounding citizens, people tend to reject anyone or anything associated with that company. For instance, when a new business is set out, it needs people to operate it. Well! now that locals won't like this business, most of them don't want to work there. Even when company hires people from outside this city, they might need locals help in renting a place to live. People would also reject the product manufactured there and would even give negative reviews about it that would lead to over all brand diminishing for the company. This will not only affect this branch of the company but will reflect in business at other places as well. So company by itself should avoid establishing a business operation when netizens oppose.
Some might argue that, listening to citizens might shut a business opportunity for the company or even lead to exclusion of a particular organization by citizens. But considering the trouble it could cause to locals and for the company itself, such establishment should be avoided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Now
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Suggestion: don't
...s wont like this business, most of them dont want to work there. Even when company h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, for instance, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86294416244 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68807488831 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8559398327 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.842105263 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2660240583 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847462150386 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725031542331 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166508908909 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241608541503 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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