Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In this age of extensive satellite, or space, communication, is it really possible to regard some living man or woman as a hero? While few critics - including the author of the claim - might argue that "absolutely, it is not possible", and they strive to corroborate their position by reasoning that such heroes, due to twenty-four hour media scrutiny, will lose their reputation, it may be apparently a compelling reason, but I disagree with these critics, however. As a result, my cut-and-dried opinion is that insomuch as today, it is really possible to regard some living man - or woman - as a hero, and get inspired from them. Media do their job, but having said that, there is no certainty that they will damage such legend's reputation.
Firstly, and probably most importantly, our ideals might be from different professions - like athletics, art and dramas, military professions et cetera; however, whatever be their profession, they can inspire us. Sachin Tendulkar, for example, is widely regarded as the greatest batsman of all time in cricket; he is the only one scoring more than hundred centuries in international cricket, only one to score more than thirty thousands in international one-day matches - and the first and the only one to secure double century in a single match. No wonder, millions of Indians regards him as a true hero and worship as god of cricket. Nevertheless, media reports has condemned him for several reasons; he is accused of being unnecessarily arrogant and solipsistic, and in addition, not giving respect to Rahul Dravid (another talented Indian cricketer). For all media scrutiny and accusation, he is a living hero for millions of Indians, who loves cricket.
Furthermore, in spite of media blames and condemnations, some people could become genuine heroes, solving complex problems of their generation. For instance, Rookmangud Katawal (former Chief of Army Staffs of Nepalese Army) were accused of severe human right violation during Maoist insurgency, and media ridiculed him the fullest. In contrast to our worst expectations, he successfully accomplished the integration of insurgents into the national army demising a decade long civil war; if he were not there at that time, thousands of people would have died for no reasons. Consequently, in spite of media scrutiny and blames, he stood as a real, and of course, living hero.
Finally, as aforementioned, few critics, including the one who made above claim, might believe that media diagnosis will surely spoil one's image, yet it is a cursory judgment and does not accounts serious real-life experiences. Khum Bahadur Khadka, former home minister of Government of Nepal, is often lampooned by media, since he put some puritanical restriction on medias during insurgency. Owing to that fact, media still pillory him. In contrast to the media efforts, he successfully won central committee membership of Nepali Congress - largest democratic party of Nepal, this year too; his political base has not shaken a bit and his cadres desperately regard him as a living hero for his works.
To recapitulate, the examples, evidences and arguments discussed above make it crystal-clear that in spite of media scrutiny, people can be a living heroes for their fandom; such heroes could be from different walks of life - including sports, military, politics etc. There is no guarantee that media and their judgments will surely deteriorate their reputation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 734, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'legends'' or 'legend's'?
Suggestion: legends'; legend's
...no certainty that they will damage such legends reputation. Firstly, and probably mo...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...t; he is the only one scoring more than hundred centuries in international cricket, onl...
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Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... several reasons; he is accused of being unnecessarily arrogant and solipsistic, ...
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Line 3, column 784, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rogant and solipsistic, and in addition, not giving respect to Rahul Dravid anoth...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding the one who made above claim, might believe that media diagnosis will surely...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... that media diagnosis will surely spoil ones image, yet it is a cursory judgment and...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'account'
Suggestion: account
...t it is a cursory judgment and does not accounts serious real-life experiences. Khum Bah...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'since the put'?
Suggestion: since the put
... of Nepal, is often lampooned by media, since he put some puritanical restriction on medias ...
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Line 7, column 543, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '- the largest'.
Suggestion: - the largest
...committee membership of Nepali Congress - largest democratic party of Nepal, this year to...
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Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hero'?
Suggestion: hero
... media scrutiny, people can be a living heroes for their fandom; such heroes could be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, of course, as a result, in contrast to, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2908.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28727272727 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00479868691 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 916.2 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.8951211353 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.052631579 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9473684211 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5263157895 5.21951772744 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11014369888 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360942713479 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361966864907 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649196816241 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256142884868 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 100.480337079 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.