Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In nowadays life, people mostly care and watch about the scandals thanks to the internet the world become a village and every day everybody hear about something new and fresh. Some people dislike talking about gossip and loating this behavior. However, few know about the that gossip can help developing the society, see problem clearly and improve problem-solving attitudes toward life.
Firstly, some scandles help to improve the sociaty in every aspect such as militery and econamic. People certainly care about their life so when they heard about horrible news and scandals such as Iranian atomic program. they improve and develop their military power spend a huge amount of money on guns and the state-of-art technology.So they will not allow a foreign country to invade.
Secondly, gossip about international problem help to improve knowledge of an inhabitant of the place, and this help people become ore and more concern about the natural environment. For example, ORUMIE lake this place suffer from the lake of concern and drain. But when environmentalist heart scandals about the place they become interested also this scandalous help them to conserve this lake.
Thirdly, scandals can be a source of reining friendship not just between people but also between countries especially the border one. because of that mostly scientist disagree and hate about scandals and the attitudes come from this scandals
In the conclusion, some citizen believes the scandals good because let country to develop, improve people knowledge about neglect. Despite this, some people have no interest in knowledge base from gossip and think it is devastating to care about this talk. so, in the end, It is related to the way people thinking and in today's life, there is a lot of source for checking the true behand this talk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays life, people mostly care and watch abou...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...few know about the that gossip can help developing the society, see problem clearly and im...
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Suggestion: They
...candals such as Iranian atomic program. they improve and develop their military powe...
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Suggestion: So
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...nd the attitudes come from this scandals In the conclusion, some citizen believes...
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Suggestion: So
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of sources'.
Suggestion: a lot of sources
...e thinking and in todays life, there is a lot of source for checking the true behand this talk....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20338983051 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53919801765 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4130691358 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848730205526 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348395822643 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313427683256 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574418745788 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206602358962 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.