This topic raises the controversial issue of whether students should choose their field of study based on personal interests or based on the job opportunities.Indisputably, having a lucrative job is one of the main proposes of the education. However, should we realize the importance of the personal interests and talents on being prosperous, we will ponder over it much more scrupulously.
I do believe that people should consider their interests and talents for choosing a field of study and these are my justifications. To begin with, that talent plays an important role in doing well in any field is an undeniable fact, therefore, to excel in educational life and consequently, career; people should pursue their interests.
the second reason why I advocate this point of view lie in the fact that employers always prefer to recruit a well trained and adept employee, Hence, considering only job availability in choosing the field of study does not lead to getting a job in the future.
finally, if you choose your study field by the job opportunities even though you maybe you can get a job, the job that you do not like and have no zeal to work; job not only should addresses the materialist needs but also it must fulfill our spiritual needs as well. Accordingly, working in a field that we do not like makes the life boring and perhaps leads to quitting the job.
having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well. Most people attend schools to get a job faster and easier, hence, if they choose their field by job availability they could get a job immediately after graduation with a high salary and this can encourage them to study and makes the field interesting for them.
by taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion ca be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the advantages of the studying the interesting field in being successful and finding a job is not logical.Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to studying based on talents and interests, and can improve several aspects of the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Indisputably
...rests or based on the job opportunities.Indisputably, having a lucrative job is one of the m...
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Suggestion: The
...people should pursue their interests. the second reason why I advocate this point...
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Suggestion: Finally
... lead to getting a job in the future. finally, if you choose your study field by the ...
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Suggestion: address
...ve no zeal to work; job not only should addresses the materialist needs but also it must ...
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Suggestion: Having
...nd perhaps leads to quitting the job. having discussed the issue from that point of ...
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Suggestion: By
...makes the field interesting for them. by taking all above-mentioned arguments in...
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Suggestion: Attending
...essful and finding a job is not logical.Attending to this issue meticulously contributes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98314606742 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17171527818 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6437920752 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.272727273 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3636363636 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 5.21951772744 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387728160722 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154044980592 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117495303279 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200473767674 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734510213589 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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