Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Education seeks to enlighten and inspire us but fails to do so completely. We aquire teh graduation degree, but fail to find our complete potential. In an attempt to get the best grades and land the best possible job most of the times, college students ted to ignore their interests and talents. Surely a high paying job can get one all the luxuries, but hte satisfaction of excelling in one's field of interest is unparalleled. Different group of people have contrasting thoughts on the subject of what to pursue for higher studies. While a part of the population believes that students should consider only their talents and interests while choosing their field of study, many seem to disagree. People do believe that the choice of a field of study should be based on the availability of jobs in that field. A deeper look at the subject will surely help reach a better conclusion.
The author here says that talents and interests should be the guiding force while picking the field of study. It is true that conventionally high paying jobs and the field of interest might not intersect, but in long run, one will definately taste success and will be able to avail all the luxuries. Interest and Talent have always pushed people to work harder and get better at their craft. People tend to burn the midnight oil, to outdo themselves everday. Guiding force behind several successful people in any field has always been their passion to achieve more and get better. Take for example the case of Lata Mangeshkar, the famous India singer. Staring in millions of songs, she has been workshipped in the field if Indian Classical Music. Had she switched her career path to a high paying job after facing few failures or rejection, the story would have been completely different. Not only music, the likes of Sachin Tendulkar, Mark Zuckerberg, Ramanujan, Einstein all of them credit their success to their interests and passion.
It cannot be disregarded that number of people base their choice on the availaibility of jobs. It is necessary to find a well paying livelihood in order to support oneself and family. Hard work and preservelance can help one achieve whatever they wish to even if they are not natually gifted. Economic stability is a matter of concern for any midlle class human investing lakhs of money in education of their childern and will surely persuade them to take up fields with higher paying jobs. Take for example the case of Reliance Industries. What started as a small company with no family backing in business has over time only grown in both size and success. Founders of all the big companies and startups try to tap the unknown market, which is only possible by following the fields with higher proportion of jobs or success.
Both the arguments about the field of study have equal pros and cons. A thin line exists between the two arguments which is increasingly getting merged. A huge proportion of people are trying to earn a good livelihood by following the field of interest, which has only become possible due to a more diverse curriculum that collges offer. Take for the example the case of Data Science. What seemed like a field requiring high computer science intellect has seen a sharp rise of people pursuing from different domains. The mathematical background on which the field is based on allows everyone to equally explore the domain.
A sharp contrast exists between the two group of people regarding the choice of field of interest. True that availability of jobs play an important role in deciding the field of study, the area of interest of the student should not be ignored. Colleges in current times have very vast and diverse curriculum which allows students to hand-pick their subjects and follows their passion along with pursuing courses with a great job market. A combination of both the arguments to choose the field of study will surely do wonders to the academic and professional lives of college students.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s, but hte satisfaction of excelling in ones field of interest is unparalleled. Diff...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, well, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 101.0 58.6224719101 172% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3296.0 2235.4752809 147% => OK
No of words: 675.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88296296296 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09713273454 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57153351845 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 327.0 215.323595506 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484444444444 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1011.6 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.222295929 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8529411765 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429816348666 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987140815866 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109336676571 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258545405423 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117492363368 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s, but hte satisfaction of excelling in ones field of interest is unparalleled. Diff...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, well, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 101.0 58.6224719101 172% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3296.0 2235.4752809 147% => OK
No of words: 675.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88296296296 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09713273454 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57153351845 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 327.0 215.323595506 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484444444444 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1011.6 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.222295929 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8529411765 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429816348666 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987140815866 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109336676571 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258545405423 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117492363368 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.