Some people believe that conservation efforts to protect the environment at the cost of human progress are unnecessary. Others believe that society must preserve the environment regardless of costs or efforts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Environment is phenomina which give aboundant amout of fruit to people without paying any big amount. It's responsiblity of every one, to come with hepling hand for environment. But according statement, I Partially disagree with second statement suggest that, Those who believe that society must preserve the environment environment regardless of costs or effort. Generally, in an environment output take several days, several years for an output. No one can expect it get fruit immagiately.
In years ago ,monks have power to generate environment in very pretty way. so most of life of human lie on environment, they eat fruits, leaves of tree and lived up to 100 -200 years. They can survive there life with environment, but the current scienario which is totally opposite. Person cut the tree, and sale it for some amount, so his family survived on his income. But on the other hand, because of cutting of tree oxygen level of whole environment which get disturb. Major difference between and previous life style changes, there are several addition of requirement of human which late him work against environment.
There are several need which person want to fulfil of his survivance, so he may struggle in his life surviving in an growing world. Which is opposite to years ago, the simple life style, without strrugleness people survive.No one force to person, to preserve regardless of cost and effort, even though society starts activity of planting of trees, it's not possible to every member to maintain it, even though it's costless but it require air, water, and sun light. It possible to provide water but, if it's missed out then tree might be decomposed.
In Oppsite way, I Partially disagree with given statement suggest that,some people believe that conservation effort to protect environment at cost of human progree are unnecessary. Even though technology, it at pinnacle point, but human without environment, hold nothing meaning. The statement suggest that, environment protect unnecssary. The best example ever seen, pandameic situation people death occur because of unavailablity of oxygen, so person have fear of lower oxygen level. Even though people have money, higher technology but can't be more survived because of unavailability of oxygen. The reason whole and sole to person who under estimate environment by cutting trees.
In Conclusion, it's acceptable one can't preserve regardless of costs and environment, because of serveral addition requirement of human. But on other hand one can't taken environment to be unnecessary, because even though it may give result after some years. In example of mango tree, society seed mango tree it's takes nearly 100 years to getting fruit. Society of mindset with even though they may not get output, there future generation adopt there style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: environment
... believe that society must preserve the environment environment regardless of costs or effort. Generall...
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Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...ars for an output. No one can expect it get fruit immagiately. In years ago ,mon...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t get fruit immagiately. In years ago ,monks have power to generate environment...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...enerate environment in very pretty way. so most of life of human lie on environmen...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun addition seems to be countable; consider using: 'several additions'.
Suggestion: several additions
... previous life style changes, there are several addition of requirement of human which late him ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun need seems to be countable; consider using: 'several needs'.
Suggestion: several needs
... work against environment. There are several need which person want to fulfil of his surv...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e may struggle in his life surviving in an growing world. Which is opposite to ye...
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...n an growing world. Which is opposite to years ago, the simple life style, withou...
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Suggestion: No
...le, without strrugleness people survive.No one force to person, to preserve regard...
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Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...ain it, even though its costless but it require air, water, and sun light. It possible ...
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Suggestion: , some
...sagree with given statement suggest that,some people believe that conservation effort...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...nt, hold nothing meaning. The statement suggest that, environment protect unnecssary. T...
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Line 7, column 540, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eople have money, higher technology but cant be more survived because of unavailabil...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s. In Conclusion, its acceptable one cant preserve regardless of costs and envir...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In Conclusion, its acceptable one cant preserve regardless of costs and environ...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...irement of human. But on other hand one cant taken environment to be unnecessary, be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24611973392 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73638087555 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525498891353 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.3138372329 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5833333333 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7916666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278452813957 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075847764931 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822552534856 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158855954668 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528436376529 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.