In my opinion every factors of the society have the liability to promote the well-being of their society and environment and corporations are not exceptional. It is definitely true that corporation are urged to have earn and profits in order to be more prosperous in their trades, but they do not care about the society and environment that they operate within. So, this policy would gradually weaken and destroy the society in the long perspective.
They are a wide rang of companies in a city, For instance a construction company in turn should not only service their citizens regarding building more luxury accommodations, but they ought to be more cautious about nature and environment. They should not cut don trees and ruin the jungles in order to provide adequate space for their projects. When it comes to car factories, they should have a balance in their car production prior to confronting with huge congestion throughout the cities. It is often claim that car factories by overproducing would result in traffic and air pollution in the cities that would contribute to hearth failure and other breathing problems. So, it would be wise if they do not mere attention to their benefits and investment.
It is also important to express that if corporations do not feel their responsibilities appropriately, the downsides that they bring about would affects the poor members of the societies more seriously than the loaded members, in the light of the fact that the needy people could not afford to provide suitable medical and other service that could protect them from the problem that corporations are caused.
To sum up, it should be taken into account that all the corporations that are working in a societies align with making money, they are urged to have privilege for their societies and environment no matter what field they are based in.
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- Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say– Why are you moving to another house? – Describe your presen 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...true that corporation are urged to have earn and profits in order to be more prosper...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...e downsides that they bring about would affects the poor members of the societies more ...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a society' or simply 'societies'?
Suggestion: a society; societies
...ll the corporations that are working in a societies align with making money, they are urged...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01290322581 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83741906145 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2675188662 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.4 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313581995924 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123411185782 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078739785862 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197941460645 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05638326346 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.