In the world of politicians, whether to yield to public is a tough option. In order to make their status solid or shelter themselves from public condemnation, some leaders, especially in the democratic countries, will compromise to the pressure of people. However, those who will not compromise guarantee the efficiency somehow. Those leaders, from my perspective, are much better than former ones. Thus I agree with the statement that an effective leader is supposed to remain consistently.
To begin with, there are too many examples illustrating the negative results of a compromised leader. A man who leads his country should be strongheart and for a while indifferent to the opposite once he clearly knows his policy is accurate. The former prime minister of the Great British promised to his citizens that after his successful election he will definitely hold a vote for Brenix. And by the appointed time he could have terminated the vote since he knew the disconnection with the EU is absolutely no merit. Yet he kept his promise and his knight debonair. And his naive and innocent citizens failed him so he formally decided to quit. This tragedy could have been stopped by his strong politic influence.
Despite the fact that leaders always lie to gain support from folks, people still buy it without any hesitance. They just could not help hearing sweet but unrealistic promise. During presidential election all the candidates will put their ideas as well as slogens to advertise. And citizens of the U.S from their bottom of the hearts believed in them. What is irony is their promise most of the time could not be realized. They just remain consistently, and nothing has really changed.
What if a leader remain consistently , in other words, becomes a sturdy badass? Well the Russia's leader Putin is best example. There is no deny that he is the one of the greatest leader in the world, and he sticks to his ideas. Ignoring the media and the people's marches or even riots could affect his reputation, but in a long run his policies could be effective. That's why in some countries which are small in territory the leaders are always strong military commanders instead of intellectuals or merchants.
Effective or not should be concluded by a leader's country's economy growth, military scales, techology development and citizen's wellfare. How people think actually doesn't count. And remaing consistently and solid is long period insightful ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Suggestion: That's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a leader' or simply 'leaders'?
Suggestion: a leader; leaders
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, still, thus, well, while, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0763546798 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77123084073 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588669950739 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0385231097 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2692307692 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11538461538 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199794157474 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511591668805 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467251483509 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111311026595 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443124820427 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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