As a political leader, it it very imporntant for him to be meticulous when he is making descisions. All these selection he made could be extremly inffluential to the public.Someone suggest the policitcal leaders should make compromise with the publice with the lost of principle, but I don't think it is neccesary to do this as a political leader must be confident for himself. People voting for him also becasuce of his conficence of making choice while not a public opinion blender all the time.
First of all, a political leader is a strong individual as he is on behalf of the people. As a symbol of power, he must insist on himself in the ocassion that may break the principle. When London was bombed to crashes, Winston Churhchill, the Prime Minister, urged the people of the nation to fight back:" we fight from streets, we fight fromr hills, we fight from our home, and NEVER NEVER NEVER GIVE UP" , this famous speech inspired from kids to the Queen to fight against the Nazi Germany Troops, the peolpe of england "keep calm and carry on" to make a miracle that won against Hitler.
Another reason is that the public may not know the truth of some business. To be more effective, as a leader,he is the only one to balance affairs as a whole. Another story also come from president, the President Roosevelt. As the War II went worse and Nazi was about to win the war, the President Roosevelt considered the importance that the US should help european countries to fight against Germany, but the congress, do not know the emergency of the situation in europe and antiwar thought was on the stage,did not validate this policy. As he got informed about the Pear Harbor may be attacked before it really happened, the President did not take measure to defend, as the tragedy took place, the congress found the importance of fight back, then the US army went to battle immediately. With the help of the US, we won the War II.
On the contrary, I do not address the idea that a political leader should be a dictator who control everything, here comes the importance of the congress, as we can disucuss interal an international affairs together in a peaceful time. The leader should listen to the public when it comes with economy and publice life affairs.
In conclusion, I think the political leader shoule insist the principle more than yield to the public. As this is what a successful and high-efficiency political leader is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77049180328 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68939239792 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.776649034 60.3974514979 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3125 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204147586016 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812929864974 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640228881781 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131763671301 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731125585734 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.