Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
It is obvious that the overall success of the society is important; however, it depends on the situation that how much it is going to cost and how much it is going to hurt normal people. On the other hand, it is impossible to make every citizen happy because the poverty has been always existed. On my opinion, there should be a balance between welfare of the people and overall accomplishment of the society depending on the situation.
Economic growth is definitely always good for every society, but it depends on how much it is going to interrupt citizens welfare. For example, factories those produce high quality of products to sell and make a good profit which make economic development for the society. At the same time, they might discharge all the pollution to a river close to people’s houses which is not good because later or sooner most of the residents on that area need to move somewhere else against their wills. That is not a good way to be successful.
Additionally, victory in Wars is important if it won’t make normal people hard. If the government only care about success in War and not welfare of the people, general citizens will get in trouble. If the government spends all the nation money on weapons and military families what will happen to normal people. They will be hungry with no food. That is not a moral way to earn the victory.
However, it is impossible to bring happiness to every citizen life. It is really good that low-income families can have free or cheap health insurance and food stamps in California, but the poverty still does exist. There are still many homeless in different parts of the California.
The overall achievement of the society is good but only when it does not make normal people lives hard. On the other hand, even with putting people welfare before overall accomplishment of the society, unhappy citizens still exist. It is not possible to make everybody’s life perfect. As a conclusion, making balance between people well-being and society achievement can be a good solution to handle difficult situations better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
...every citizen happy because the poverty has been always existed. On my opinion, there should be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85434173669 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64375618375 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1028656266 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2105263158 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235763085761 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721637640184 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075199978514 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130648450306 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945719888612 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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