As students, the major mission is studying and learning from the tutors and books.While whether they should always question what they are learning rather than accepting it passively depends on the levels and fields they are studying. The field where they are in sometimes is welcomed by challenging,especially in scientific field. I will adress my views in three points.
To begin with, the students should learn the basic knowlede without questioning as it is the fundamental part of knowledge. Or in other words, when we were young kids, we should learing basic math and aplabets from our teachers, because they are the basic tools that we can use to recognize the world around us. So we must follow the educators when we are at the beginning of the field.
Once we get in the door of the field, we also should follow the guidence of educators as there are some practical experience they can provide to us. Some of them are the tender warnning in the field, while the others, in most ocassions are the unknow areas which we can explore.There was a debate about whether the Pluto is the ninth biggest planet of the Solar System.While the scientists had been discussing this problem for decades without results. After nearly a generations' endeavor, the new coming astromoners, revised the view by advanced and perplexing calculation of the Pluto's mass and orbit, these astrmoners, who were the students of those previous scientits, disclosed the outcoming that the Pluto was expled from the list of biggest planets of Solar System.This significant revision will benefit the subsequent astromony development and space travelling plans of the world.
As there are always some certain conditions in the field, here I want to emphasize that the importance of questioning what we are learning is not merely based on the cognition ourselevs but we also can jump out of the frame of the field to make more progress.Just like Newton was hit by an falling apple from the apple tree, while not everyone hit by an apple could discover the theory of Gravity.If we can not stand on the shoulder of giants, we should be more realistic.Once the NASA want to invent a pen used in the space which never need refill, the scientist who tried a lot still made nothing at all. As they turned to the social cleverness by advertisement in newspapers, one little kid wrote a letter to them: "Have you ever tried pencil?" This is the most efficient tool which can write in the space then. So we should be more realistic when the frame of the field confined our imagination , that is to say one can not always follow the mainstream of knowledge.
Here I will bolster those students who can question the authority established before. As we should view this essat in part. In the basic field of education, we should follow the educators, while when we get deeper, we should learn how to ask questions to make more progress.
- In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for t 58
- Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing a 66
- People can solve important problems in their daily life on their own or with the help from families. The help from the government is no necessary. Agree or disagree 90
- If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting y 50
- It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, while, in other words, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 499.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84569138277 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77805399516 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503006012024 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.10617977528 419% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.827841946 60.3974514979 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.2 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2666666667 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131546439371 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049305450351 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363504216327 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787875594544 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194853259554 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.