In this world different kind of people live in different places and also sometimes find diversity in the same region too. Any would find different types of people with different fashion, attitude and living conditions in any particular region.
Understanding this diversity and their characteristic, one might think of studying the major city in the region or around. As generally happens a small town tries to imitate or try to achieve what the big city has achieved in terms of lifestyle, living conditions etc. a prime example can be seen in India where people from small town or villages aspire to be living life as people live in big cities like Mumbai, Delhi etc. Any major city in any country in the world is a major hub for business, thus making the city the main point in its country. If that city won’t work properly then the whole country might suffer. The small town or villages work along the lines of the city and try to help all they can to the city.
Historically, a city portrayed the grandeur and power possessed by the country, the more the city thrived, the more that country was powerful. A city shows the contrasts in people’s life, the rich and poor, the political leaders and civilians. As historically seen in the big countries, studying the major cities were helpful enough to know how powerful, knowledgeable or weak a country.
A major city is the political and economic capital of the country and shows how developed or financially well it is. To study the economic or financial power of any country, the study of cities is enough.
Major cities give a general idea of what the important characteristic of society are and help to get to know about any country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'try'?
Suggestion: try
...ound. As generally happens a small town tries to imitate or try to achieve what the b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66380796979 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9312469285 60.3974514979 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0597747587283 0.243740707755 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272305594247 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331130843692 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396641520492 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203757835282 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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